VJ microcosm- take 2

[JASONandDAA 0]

In light of the last attempt, here another goes

The pain I feel is tightly caught my wind

And I cannot seem to let go

Every waking second, of every waking day

I wish my life to be some other time, wishing it away

But if I carry on in this manner

What life will I have left?

By the time my loved one catches with me

my spirit and strength have changed

always looking to tomorrow

can no longer see today

But these are thoughts in mere whisper

and emotion on a glance

for one day in the future

I shall have my chance

To be one and whole with the vision

I have looked thru mind's eye every day

and with this motion I shall grieve,

I have nothing left to say

[w¡n9Nµ7 §£@¥€r 123]

How about a prose version for the poetry-deaf?

[JASONandDAA 0]

How about a prose version for the poetry-deaf?

Here it goes-

I got my mind on my money and my money on my mind

I like big butts and I cannot lie, you other brothers can't deny...

Kriss kross will make you jump jump jump

I like my coffee sugar with coffee and cream

[w¡n9Nµ7 §£@¥€r 123]

I still don't get it.

[JASONandDAA 0]

I still don't get it.

I don't either.

[w¡n9Nµ7 §£@¥€r 123]

I still don't get it.

I don't either.

But this is your thread!

[Kazan' Tiger 1]

:lol:

I still don't get it.

I don't either.

But this is your thread!

[no name 1]

How about a prose version for the poetry-deaf?

Here it goes-

I got my mind on my money and my money on my mind

I like big butts and I cannot lie, you other brothers can't deny...

Kriss kross will make you jump jump jump

I like my coffee sugar with coffee and cream

Some people are unable to think 'outside the box'....

[JASONandDAA 0]

I still don't get it.

I don't either.

But this is your thread!

But I thought it is OUR thread...there is no me...no you...it's all the BIG LABOWSKI

[Nagishkaw 510]

Jason,

Just jump right in

post in any thread

just tell us what's going on

inside your troubled head.

We are not that clickish

as you wish to believe

So think about staying

cos we don't want you to leave.

[no name 1]

Jason,

Just jump right in

post in any thread

just tell us what's going on

inside your troubled head.

We are not that clickish

as you wish to believe

So think about staying

cos we don't want you to leave.

Well done!

[Empress of Groovy 373]

Jason, I think that Joyce would appreciate an apology for your derogatory comments regarding her magical helmet.

~Julie

[Nagishkaw 510]

Thanks.

[JASONandDAA 0]

Jason, I think that Joyce would appreciate an apology for your derogatory comments regarding her magical helmet.

~Julie

You got it...my deepest apologies....please forgive the ravings of an extremely frustrated putz

[Nagishkaw 510]

Don't sell yourself short. He who is without frustration cast the first stone.