My name ain't Stella....

[Yaads 0]

Mya+Skettle= HIV+AIDS= death

Jawi~ This is great! You are so talented!

Edited October 24, 2007 by Yardiewife

[Sonshyne 2]

Jawi...Chica, you are so DYAM good...as I read Mya & Delmar's sex scene...I'm sitting here panting along with them!!! It was very tastefully done...great descriptive usage...it's great when the reader feel as if they are watching the whole scene just from words... THIS IS YOUR GIFT, Jawi...I will always encourage you to use it! You are a wonderful writer ....alot better than many authors that I had to pay-to-read-their #######!!!

We need to find you a publisher for real!!!

Many blessings...God has something REALLY good planned for you Jawi...mark my words...your time is coming!!! Thank you so much for sharing...especially today! I know you are in pain with your shoulder and I sincerely want you to know how much we truly appreciate it!!

-Gill

I agree Very well written

((((((((((((Jawi))))))))))))

Where yuh at gyal??? It's been about 3 hrs since the last installment

[Jonesie 1]

She must be on break from typing...come back soon cause I don't feel like working today

[Forever Young 1]

Jawi...Chica, you are so DYAM good...as I read Mya & Delmar's sex scene...I'm sitting here panting along with them!!! It was very tastefully done...great descriptive usage...it's great when the reader feel as if they are watching the whole scene just from words... THIS IS YOUR GIFT, Jawi...I will always encourage you to use it! You are a wonderful writer ....alot better than many authors that I had to pay-to-read-their #######!!!

We need to find you a publisher for real!!!

Many blessings...God has something REALLY good planned for you Jawi...mark my words...your time is coming!!! Thank you so much for sharing...especially today! I know you are in pain with your shoulder and I sincerely want you to know how much we truly appreciate it!!

-Gill

I agree Very well written

((((((((((((Jawi))))))))))))

Where yuh at gyal??? It's been about 3 hrs since the last installment

Thanks Sonny ...How are you, today? I know we are anxious for the next installment, but lets give Jawi a chance to marinate and come up with something GOOD! ...I prefer she tek her time and mek it wut de wait!

Bless-bless ,

Gill

She must be on break from typing...come back soon cause I don't feel like working today

You and me BOTH...how are the phones today?

Gill

[jawi876 2]

Jawi...Chica, you are so DYAM good...as I read Mya & Delmar's sex scene...I'm sitting here panting along with them!!! It was very tastefully done...great descriptive usage...it's great when the reader feel as if they are watching the whole scene just from words... THIS IS YOUR GIFT, Jawi...I will always encourage you to use it! You are a wonderful writer ....alot better than many authors that I had to pay-to-read-their #######!!!

We need to find you a publisher for real!!!

Many blessings...God has something REALLY good planned for you Jawi...mark my words...your time is coming!!! Thank you so much for sharing...especially today! I know you are in pain with your shoulder and I sincerely want you to know how much we truly appreciate it!!

-Gill

Chica, all I can say is that I love you. TY

[SupportOAFJF 0]

My my..mi tink a me a sidung pon Tran lap..Very well done Jawi..mi a read a fi mi skin a ketch a fire...woaiii mi hot ...need to take off my cardigan can't take eyes off the screen want to ketch the 1st of it all...JAWIIIII...come on nuh..a waan tell u mi always have a hard time ready too much on screen but mi no have NOOOO problem wid dis yah one..it BAD !!

Dutty Tran a plan fi breed di gyal a gi her what evea else him no know him have....chaaa

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Edited October 24, 2007 by kimmykashi

[jawi876 2]

*Toya and Tradee were enjoying a comfortable and polite conversation about life in Jamaica versus life in America. Tradee is very attracted to her, but she is not the woman for him. After seeing Melodee in action, he is afraid no other woman will quench his thirst. Tradee flirts with her, and he can see her peaked interest in the darkness. He stands closely behind her as they stand on the little bridge over the fish pond. His hands are on her hips. Toya shivers a little, like the breeze is a little too chilly for her. He instinctively moves to encircle her in his arms. His chin is resting lightly in the crook of her neck. He is enjoying her natural scent barely masked by the floral scent of her perfume.

Both of them hold their breath as the sounds of their companions float over on the Caribbean breeze. He can feel his reaction to those sounds, and ponders acting on it. Toya arches her back to bring her butt closer to his building erection. Tradee begins planting small kisses along her neckline, still testing the water. Toya knows that it will not go any further than some harmless kissing and fondling. She breaks from his embrace and turns to face him. Her eyes question his eyes for his unspoken intentions. She doesn’t want to be hurt or used. Satisfied with what she thinks she finds in their depths, she closes her eyes and tilts her head upward.

Tradee leans down to meet her upturned lips. He can sense her hesitation and uncertainty, she is not an experienced lover. Tradee wants a woman that knows her way around a man. He is disappointed in what he discovers. He becomes aloof and rude in his mannerisms, and roughly tilts her pelvis into his, grinding ruthlessly against her. His hands are everywhere at once. He is pulling at the tiny buttons holding her blouse together, fumbling to release her button and zippered jeans. His lips are harsh and uncaring against hers. Toya pulls away from him, and slaps his hands back.*

Toya: I think it’s time to leave now. I don’t know what you take me for, but I warn you not to touch me again! *Toya attempts to cover her overexposed breasts now, suddenly ashamed of the image she is portraying.*

Tradee: Bumbocl***!!! Whaa mi do yuh? Yuh gwaan like a wan skettel! Mi nuh rate yuh hennyway star. Hot gyal ah nuh fatti inna yaad! Yuh tuh good fe simple Rasta like mi? Eeehnnn? *kiss teet* Tek wey yuhself mi gyal. I and I rude bwoy nuh beg fe punnany. Straight and dun! Have tuh get the pum but mi nuh rape! *Tradee forced himself to forget the memory of the day he would have been made to eat those words. He was ashamed to admit it to himself, but he had done just that, a long time ago.*

[Forever Young 1]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Ehhheh...obviously Mistress Benz a feel betta tuhday!!! Yuh come in wid guns blazin'...a setdung deh law!... Arrright Madam Controller ...I will lockhoff the sneak peak PM's...Yuh 'appy now...cause Lawd knows it's all about keeping deh Mistress 'APPY!!

Blessed (L)always, Gill

P.S-Mi glad yuh a feel betta still...mi didda miss mi hole miserable mistress...so did Spraggs!!

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Ehhheh...obviously Mistress Benz a feel betta tuhday!!! Yuh come in wid guns blazin'...a setdung deh law!... Arrright Madam Controller ...I will lockhoff the sneak peak PM's...Yuh 'appy now...cause Lawd knows it's all about keeping deh Mistress 'APPY!!

Blessed (L)always, Gill

P.S-Mi glad yuh a feel betta still...mi didda miss mi hole miserable mistress...so did Spraggs!!

HAhaha....yes i feel much better thanks..Hubby rub mi up wid some vicks (Gill)

[Forever Young 1]

Jawi...Chica, you are so DYAM good...as I read Mya & Delmar's sex scene...I'm sitting here panting along with them!!! It was very tastefully done...great descriptive usage...it's great when the reader feel as if they are watching the whole scene just from words... THIS IS YOUR GIFT, Jawi...I will always encourage you to use it! You are a wonderful writer ....alot better than many authors that I had to pay-to-read-their #######!!!

We need to find you a publisher for real!!!

Many blessings...God has something REALLY good planned for you Jawi...mark my words...your time is coming!!! Thank you so much for sharing...especially today! I know you are in pain with your shoulder and I sincerely want you to know how much we truly appreciate it!!

-Gill

Chica, all I can say is that I love you. TY

I love you too Baby Girl...don't forget that!!

Always deh yah fi yuh!

, Gill

[Forever Young 1]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Ehhheh...obviously Mistress Benz a feel betta tuhday!!! Yuh come in wid guns blazin'...a setdung deh law!... Arrright Madam Controller ...I will lockhoff the sneak peak PM's...Yuh 'appy now...cause Lawd knows it's all about keeping deh Mistress 'APPY!!

Blessed (L)always, Gill

P.S-Mi glad yuh a feel betta still...mi didda miss mi hole miserable mistress...so did Spraggs!!

HAhaha....yes i feel much better thanks..Hubby rub mi up wid some vicks (Gill)

Just vicks 'im a rub yuh up wid ...Well, that certainly won't be deh case tuh-NNNOIGHT!!! (After reading Mya & Tran likkle 'escapade')

ya,

Gill

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Ehhheh...obviously Mistress Benz a feel betta tuhday!!! Yuh come in wid guns blazin'...a setdung deh law!... Arrright Madam Controller ...I will lockhoff the sneak peak PM's...Yuh 'appy now...cause Lawd knows it's all about keeping deh Mistress 'APPY!!

Blessed (L)always, Gill

P.S-Mi glad yuh a feel betta still...mi didda miss mi hole miserable mistress...so did Spraggs!!

HAhaha....yes i feel much better thanks..Hubby rub mi up wid some vicks (Gill)

Just vicks 'im a rub yuh up wid ...Well, that certainly won't be deh case tuh-NNNOIGHT!!! (After reading Mya & Tran likkle 'escapade')

ya,

Gill

U see it..cause Jawi a ketch mi skin a fire...hehee

[Forever Young 1]

Only Gill and Jonesie would want fi rush to the end...try no send no more PM's to the writer she is busy ..just WAIt oonuh hear mi...cho

Ehhheh...obviously Mistress Benz a feel betta tuhday!!! Yuh come in wid guns blazin'...a setdung deh law!... Arrright Madam Controller ...I will lockhoff the sneak peak PM's...Yuh 'appy now...cause Lawd knows it's all about keeping deh Mistress 'APPY!!

Blessed (L)always, Gill

P.S-Mi glad yuh a feel betta still...mi didda miss mi hole miserable mistress...so did Spraggs!!

HAhaha....yes i feel much better thanks..Hubby rub mi up wid some vicks (Gill)

Just vicks 'im a rub yuh up wid ...Well, that certainly won't be deh case tuh-NNNOIGHT!!! (After reading Mya & Tran likkle 'escapade')

ya,

Gill

Arrrright..let mi dive into the nex installment now!

[Forever Young 1]

WWWOOOOOOOIIIIIIIIEEEEEE...Tradee is a rapist...bwoy, deh plot a thicken!! Mi tink Toya betta off wid deh DRIVAAA..don't stop ATALL!!!!

But, we'll see what 'Jawi Mcmilian' comes up wid!!

NA NA NA NA NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...I'm lovin' it!!!!!!

Edited October 24, 2007 by Deyoungting