My name ain't Stella....

[Forever Young 1]

*Delmar turns off his phone, and stashes it under a nearby bush. Then, he walks back to his verandah. He notices Melodee’s silhouette in the growing darkness. He hopes that she is not looking to fight with him tonight. He needs to get to Ochi soon. As he gets closer, he notices that she is now standing in a very seductive pose without clothes. She is wearing nothing but the strappy silver stillettos he loves and a sexy smile.*

Delmar: Bumboc***! Mi wanda if me have enuff time fe rooks har quick before mi gwaan. Mel…babes…whaa yuh ah do? Mi tell yuh sey mi have ago a road tek care likkle business nuh. Mi cyan lef yuh an gwaan. Let mi feel mi hole mumma.

Melodee: Eeehhnnn?? Yuh tuh rude ennoh! Mi love yuh same wey still Shotta.

wweeelllll....that's all for tonight peeps! Love oonnu!

Delmar...ole dawg... ..ok u can tek a break puttus...but mek sure bright an early u sen on zeen..night night

Fi real...BRIGHT & HEARLY HEARLY inna deh mawning!!! Caan wait fi see if Toya & Tran braddah ah guh git it ON!!! This is the closest I been to some action in a while

This was a GREAT idea Chica!! Thanks again fi sharing!

Who a guh bring deh papcawn tomorrow???

unnuh,

Gill

Edited October 24, 2007 by Deyoungting

[classychic77 0]

I am sooooo hooked, if I had this book in my hands I would have read it in like an hour. You are very talented!

[jawi876 2]

I am sooooo hooked, if I had this book in my hands I would have read it in like an hour. You are very talented!

Wow. That is an awesome compliment. Thank you all for all the love and support you have shown me.

[Marlita 0]

I am sooooo hooked, if I had this book in my hands I would have read it in like an hour. You are very talented!

Wow. That is an awesome compliment. Thank you all for all the love and support you have shown me.

Thats so true....you need to write a book for real. Why aren't there any Jamaican Romance novels.....those bad boys would be best sellas. Somebody look into getting Jawi a publisha!!!

[Forever Young 1]

I am sooooo hooked, if I had this book in my hands I would have read it in like an hour. You are very talented!

Wow. That is an awesome compliment. Thank you all for all the love and support you have shown me.

Thats so true....you need to write a book for real. Why aren't there any Jamaican Romance novels.....those bad boys would be best sellas. Somebody look into getting Jawi a publisha!!!

AMEN too that! It's true though...there should be more Yard romance novels!! And Jawi, you really do need to look into doing it for real!! I know one day, Ken & myself are going to be watching TV and 'Not Stella' is gonna come on and I'm gonna be like...this story sounds so familiar!! ...where have I heard this before...LOL

Gill

Edited October 24, 2007 by Deyoungting

[jawi876 2]

You guys are going to make me up and quit my job because my head will be so big! I'm going to post something to tide you late readers/early risers over until I get a chance to log on tomorrow. Please note, my PM is now closed. I will not give sneak peeks, or reveal the plot over the phone, DeYoungTing and Jonesie

Here it goes:

*Delmar grabs her up in his arms, and Melodee quickly wraps her legs around his waist. Delmar works at the belt at his waist, and lets his pants drop. He kisses Melodee, and enters her hard at the exact same moment. Melodee uses her svelte legs to gain momentum as she whines her pelvis hard and fast against her man. Delmar uses his biceps to bring Melodee’s body crashing back onto his manhood. The silence of the night air is filled with the sounds of their fast-paced lovemaking. Mya’s smooth chocolate skin is glistening from the perspiration dampening Delmar’s forearms. Her hair is plastered to her face from the intensity of her work. Delmar is turned on even more my the look of ecstasy on her face. She is biting her lip, and her eyes are squeezed tightly shut. She is emitting deep guttural tones from the back of her throat. Mya made different sounds, she mewed like a kitten. She actually purred a couple of times while he was stroking her long and smooth.

Delmar momentarily looses his rhythm when Mya crosses his mind. He remembers how differently their bodies meshed, and he suddenly drops to the old rocker on the verandah. The memory only serves to make him harder and longer. His member is pulsating and aching for release. The old rocker creaks and moans from the weight of their joined bodies. Melodee reaches her pinnacle first, and her once fluid motions become jagged and unsteady. She cries out in her loving rude girl banter. He can feel the vibrations of her trembling thighs.

Delmar notices his brother watching from the gate in front of his home. His brother is barely visible except for the occasional glimmer of his eyes, and the steady red beacon at the end of his spliff. He and his twin have always been competitive, and women were not off limits in the past. They had shared countless women, planned as well as through trickery. Delmar loved Melodee because she had never fallen for his brother’s cunning ways. She knew instinctively that although they looked the same, he and brother did not have the same vibe.

The involuntary spasms coursing through Melodee’s pum brought him back from the past and crashing over the edge…and he lost focus on the red star at his gate. Delmar screamed out from the intensity of his orgasm. He was sure that he would have bred Melodee tonight, if it were possible. Unfortunately, it would never happen for them.

He kisses his woman passionately, and runs to go shower and dress. Melodee drags herself back inside to their bed, and tries not to think about the returning heat between her thighs. He will be back, and it will be better than ever. They will continue to celebrate their anniversary until the wee hours of the morning.

Meanwhile, Tradee continues to stare at the verandah, his eyes transfixed on the spot where he just witnessed the love of his life exude the most incredible amount of sexual energy and femininity. He has always enjoyed watching women in the throes of passion, watching their back arch as wave after wave of pure pleasure erupts from them and watching how passion twists their faces into caricature images of themselves. Jamaica doesn’t have any volcanoes, but he could name a few women that have come in as a close second to the biggest volcanoes of the world. Tradee has been loving Melodee since secondary school, but this is his first time seeing her erupt. He rubs himself and softly chants Melodee’s name. It will take a lot more than his own casual stroke to bring forth his seed, but he enjoys the fleeting fantasy. One day Melodee will be his again, he trusts that Jah will bring her back to him. Tradee is indeed a patient man.

Soon Delmar and his brother are outside his gate and walking to hail a taxi. He stops to retrieve his phone from the bush. He will swap phones with Mya tonight, and tell Melodee that the phone was in the bottom of his bag. He calls Mya and tells her to have her friend get dressed too because his brother is with him.*

Edited October 24, 2007 by jawi876

[Marlita 0]

Woo Hoo another installment!!!

[Marlita 0]

Oh man there is some drama bought to come out here! What Melodee can't have no children?! Why Tradee all in the mix? Can't wait til tomorrow. I can tell its gonna be another unfocused day in the office for me.....

....Hmmm on the veranda....I got try that one next week in the hammock!

[Jonesie 1]

Ol vagabond! How Tradee tan so? A watch im a watch - slackness!!

PLEASE CONTINUE

[jawi876 2]

Tradee: Yo mi yout? De farrin gyal sell hoff? Har a fatti? Yuh knoa mi rate strang body gyal ova mwaaga gyal dem.

Delmar: Yeah man. Both of dem well nice. Mi tell mi puss yeye gyal dat mi name Travis…so yuh have fe tell fatti dat yuh name his Delmar. Nuh bodda vex star. Afta yuh get mi name mix hup in phockery, mi nuh have a choice. If mi ago reach farrin mi have fe use yuh name star.

Tradee: Low mi mi yout. Babylon try fe hold I and I dung…but JAH Rastafari always prevails. Halle Selassie!!!

*Mya and Toya get dressed in anticipation and nervous energy. Toya is silently happy that she is meeting Tran’s identical twin brother Tradee. She didn’t want to admit to herself or Mya that she couldn’t stop bringing up the visual image of Tran at the airport. Man, that man was sexy as he**! She wonders how they got their nicknames. They go to the front desk to arrange a taxi to take them to downtown Ochi.*

Mya: I hope Tran finds my dress sexy enough. I didn’t have time to take my normal strawberries and cream milk bath. I wonder when he will venture downtown in Myaville. I’m not going to rush anything. I will take it day by day and enjoy my vacation. If he works me again the way he worked me in that restroom, the men back home are going to have to step up their game for real. I want to show him my skills with a dancer’s pole too. All those expensive a** lessons will be put to use for sho! *Mya finger comes her now voluminous ringlets, and checks her make up once more in the lobby’s full length mirror.* Are you ready T? Can you imagine we are meeting identical twins in Jamaica girl? You better be on your game too, because a greedy b***** like me will scoop them both up before you have a chance to blink. Haa-haa. I have some freaky sh** running through my head right now. Damn!

Toya: Eww. You are so nasty! Can you teach me? Haa-haa. You think he will like my outfit? My breast are saying something if I must say so myself. I love the way these jeans are hugging my curves. Thanks for making me change it up a little My. My, how are you going to tell them apart?

Mya: I don’t know girl. But my boo’s d*** curves to the left just the way I like it. So, maybe I will need to take them both to a dark corner to find out before you make your move. HA-haaa! Come on, let’s go.

*The girls walk outside the lobby to the waiting taxi. Toya is ready to tell Mya to go on by herself because the cab driver is sexy! He is checking her out, and smiles seductively at her in the rearview mirror.*

[jawi876 2]

(meet Fitz)

Fitz: Good night ladies! You are both stunningly beautiful. My name is Fitz, and it is indeed an honor to be graced by your presence. Where do I have the pleasure of escorting you ladies tonight?

Mya: Hey sexy. I’m Mya and this is my girl Toya. We need to get to the Clock Tower on Main St. *both girls scoot into the backseat and close the door*

Fitz: Eeeehh? The Clock tower is your final destination? That’s no place for two pretty women to be at this time of night. I can show you girls around if you would like, I am at your service 24 hours a day. Your wish is my command. *He glances in the mirror, and licks his lips invitingly at Toya.*

Toya: Thank you Fitz. *glancing in the rearview mirror again to catch a glimpse of his gorgeous eyes* I would love to see some places off the beaten track. I’m not interested in seeing the normal tourist traps at all. I pride myself on capturing award-winning still images. Actually, it’s my job, and I would love to capture you on film too.

Fitz: I’m sure I can manage to accommodate a simple request from such a stunning beauty. I have one condition in order to pose for your pictras. You must agree to show me those amazing beauty marks as often as possible. Your smile is my undoing Ms. Toya.

Mya: Geez get a room already. Haa-haa This man is charming the thong right off my girl! Do the damn thing Fitzgerald! While we appreciate your generous offer, we will have to decline tonight as our dance cards are already full. Why don’t you give your business card to Toya, and we will definitely take you up on your offer during our stay.

Toya: Yeah. Uh-huh. What beauty marks? Are you talking about my dimples?

Fitz: Yes, I’m speaking of those dimples that I could completely immerse myself in. Well, ladies, we are at the Clock Tower. Would you like me to wait for you?

Toya: I think that would be great. We are supposed to be meeting some people here. But, I would love to continue our chat until they arrive. I hope you don’t mind me staying here until then. *She remembers his request, and gives him her best killer smile. The one that leaves most men panting in her wake.*

Mya: Don’t mind me guys. I’m going to step out for a quick breath of fresh air. I’ll be right back. Now, don’t do anything I wouldn’t do. Behave yourselves!

Toya: Well that leaves the night wide open then. See you when you get back girl. Be safe.

Mya: Okay. See you in a sec.

Fitz: I would love to look directly at you instead of a mirror image of you. Why don’t you move to the front seat beside me? Mi wanda if de gyal sit pon ie like a chair? Tek ie heasy mi bwoy. Nuh scare de ooman hoff. Har gwaan like har shy. *Fitz pats the bucket seat next to him* Come on, don’t be shy Ms. Toya.

*Toya gets out the car and re-enters on the passenger side. She keeps a watchful eye on Mya at the same time. Fitz takes her hand in his, and makes small little circles in the middle of her palm. He leans over to whisper to her.*

Fitz: Your hands are like a baby’s skin, so soft, so smooth and just as loveable as the rest of you. I hope you don’t find me too forward. But, I would like to get to know you better Ms. Toya. I believe in complete honesty, and I am very straightforward. I must admit that it is taking every bit of restraint I can muster not to reach over and kiss every inch of you, and I do mean every…single…inch. *Fitz takes each one of her fingers into his mouth to punctuate each syllable that leaves his mouth. He lets his tongue linger and wrap around her baby finger*

Toya: OOOO…wwhheeww. I-I’m at a l-loss for words right now. I would like to get to know you better too Fitz, but there is something you should know upfront…

Fitz: *leans in closer to kiss her, and he is only hearing his heartbeat thundering in his ears. He kisses her gently on her lips, and places butterfly kisses on each of her dimples. He repeats this process, and lets his tongue gently probe each of the waiting openings that his lips had just touched moments earlier.* What were you saying beautiful?

Toya: Huh? What…just…happened? Wait…I can’t…we can’t…

*The car door opens and Mya breathlessly announces that she thinks she sees Tran and Tradee approaching them. Toya tells Fitz that she will call him when she gets back to the hotel later. Both girls walk away from the car. Mya can’t hold out any longer as this has been the longest 5 hours in her life. She begins running toward the twins, but stops in her tracks because she doesn’t know which one to jump on.*

[jawi876 2]

Mya: My God, I’m seeing doubles! They are both so sexy! I never knew locs could be so sexy underneath a baseball cap. Mya begins quietly reciting her favorite poem by Maya Angelou, to find her center and re-focus the strength of her femininity:

Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.

I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size

But when I start to tell them,

They think I'm telling lies.

I say,

It's in the reach of my arms

The span of my hips,

The stride of my step,

The curl of my lips.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

I walk into a room

Just as cool as you please,

And to a man,

The fellows stand or

Fall down on their knees.

Then they swarm around me,

A hive of honey bees.

I say,

It's the fire in my eyes,

And the flash of my teeth,

The swing in my waist,

And the joy in my feet.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

Men themselves have wondered

What they see in me.

They try so much

But they can't touch

My inner mystery.

When I try to show them

They say they still can't see.

I say,

It's in the arch of my back,

The sun of my smile,

The ride of my breasts,

The grace of my style.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

Now you understand

Just why my head's not bowed.

I don't shout or jump about

Or have to talk real loud.

When you see me passing

It ought to make you proud.

I say,

It's in the click of my heels,

The bend of my hair,

the palm of my hand,

The need of my care,

'Cause I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.©©

Don’t act the part of a ho Mya girl. You can’t even shake one, you would truly be a nutcase with two of them.

[jawi876 2]

Tradee: *whispering*Ah yuh hot gyal ova dere so? Yuh neva mention har a stunna! Where fatti? *glancing around the hordes of people milling around*

Delmar: Yeah man. Look ova dere mi yout. Fatti wait pon yuh. Har look a likkle distracted doan? Hearth Hangel Mya! My God! You are going to make me die of heart failure right pon the street. Let me look pon yuh.

Mya: Oh Tran! I missed you! *Gives Tran one of the most soul scorching kisses he has every felt. She lets her tongue dance in his mouth, and hungrily sucks on his like a nursing baby.* You taste good baby. Damn!

Tradee: Eeehhhnnn?? Tran introduce mi nuh!

Toya walks over to join the group after taking one last longing look at Fitz’s parting tail lights.*

[Jonesie 1]

(meet Fitz)

KIPPPPPO! Mi put a lack pon di phone an a tell yuh di pin numba - cah whe no see no hurt

yuh tell me yuh a beg mi a call wha yuh so search di phone fah - now a tear off mi shirt

WWWOOOOOIIIEEEE mi love di cast! Cherine, Kymani, Kiprich....wwwooooiiieeeee

Edited October 24, 2007 by Jonesie

[jawi876 2]

Toya: Hi guys. I’m Mya’s friend Toya. Obviously, she has forgotten her manners and home training by the looks of things.

Tradee: I’m Trav...umm Delmar…but you can call me Tradee or Rasta. That of course is my brother Tran. How are you ladies enjoying Jamaica so far?

Mya: I’m thoroughly enjoying my first day in paradise, and I’m looking forward to many more pleasant surprises during my stay. *She never takes her eyes off Tran while speaking.*

Delmar: I’m sure I can make all your dreams come true too Angel. Nice to officially meet you Tanya. *He manages to break free of Mya’s trance just long enough to notice the beautiful a** and thighs housed on Toya.*

Toya: It’s TOY YAH, not Tanya, and it’s nice to meet you too. I have heard great things about you. I am really enjoying Jamaica thus far. You guys definitely know how to make a woman feel welcomed.

Tradee: Lovely, you are indeed welcomed to my country anytime. Yo mi yout, let’s walk tuh Turkle Park fe likkle privacy and ting. I and I wan fe try out mi lyrics pon fatti yuhseemi?

Delmar: Straight an dun! Respect bredrin. Ladies, we respectfully ask for your company on a leisurely walk to our local park just a short distance from here.

Mya and Toya in unison: Okay.

*The small group starts moving through the sparse crowd. Somewhere from inside the crowd a man yells: “RASS!” and Tradee looks over his shoulder. He notices an acquaintance and asks the group to hold on for a minute. After he finishes chatting to his bredrin, he saunters back over to Toya with the grace of a panther stalking its prey. They continue on to Turtle Park, each couple engrossed in their private conversations.*