My name ain't Stella....

[Sonshyne 2]

Jawi come on yuh nuh wi wait!!

[Jonesie 1]

Mya: I have to get an early start, but feel free to stay here until I get back. You can order room service, enjoy the Jacuzzi and wait for me to come back and ravish your sexy a** all over again. I promise I won’t take too long.

Is she stupid? Watch Rasta hear a knock on the door and Tran is on the other side!

I was thinking the samething.. Isn't the other room right next door?? Didn't she tell Tradee the samething?

Her pum should be all worn out by now anyway!

She the straight jump off - errybody done had some a dat pum

[Jonesie 1]

Ian

This should be some good drama when he arrives on the island!

That fool...he need to go somewhere - now my blood pressure startin to go up

[Sonshyne 2]

Ian

This should be some good drama when he arrives on the island!

That fool...he need to go somewhere - now my blood pressure startin to go up

He's really gonna bring the drama to the story

[Forever Young 1]

oK, since everyone is in the story thread...I will hav ea lot to ketch up on thursday as i will be attending my cousins funeral tomorrow and will not be participating in the story.although I'm gonna miss it..

Don't let my sorrow bring u down as he is in a better place and I keep my memories of him rather than the thought of him being gone...so happy wednesday everyone...and i'll catch u guys later

P.S. Jawi puttus I mean no disrespect to ur story nor do i mean to bring sorrow here...

love all a oonu longtime..

So sorry KimKim,

You & your family are in my prayers. Safe travels

Bless,

Gill

[Dwarf_Ogress 0]

OMG Jawi! Let me say congratulations on a wonderful story! I am so hooked! I agree with everyone that you should definitely publish! I sat here and read the whole story today! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

[shrewdgal 0]

OMG Jawi! Let me say congratulations on a wonderful story! I am so hooked! I agree with everyone that you should definitely publish! I sat here and read the whole story today! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I AGREE!!!

[jawi876 2]

Delmar gets off work, and rushes to the Indian jeweler in Priory. He hands the tennis bracelet to Warren, and waits anxiously. Warren looks at the timeless piece, and back at Delmar. He wonders if Delmar knows how truly priceless the gems are. Each flawless diamond is two carats, and the rare purplish-blue hued tanzanites are each a ½ carat of pure beauty. The gems are housed in antique platinum settings. The tennis bracelet is indeed a classic. Warren sizes Delmar up again as he waits. He knows that Delmar either found the piece or ripped some poor woman off because there is no way he could afford a piece of this magnitude. He also knows that any jeweler in their right mind would never tamper with the antique platinum settings because master artisans just didn’t invest so much time and energy into their pieces anymore. He knew that at an auction he could easily get $7,500 US or better.

Delmar: How much fe ie? Mi get ie frum mi grandauntie who a live a England. Har tell mi fe give ie tuh de special lady inna mi life when de time right. Mi ready fe propose tuh har, but mi cyan give har a bracelet instead of a ring. Mi hope yuh can put de diamonds dem inna ring and mi nuh care bout de purple tings…yuh can dash dem wey ar put dem inna pair of aize rings. Yeah man. Mi could give har two differant gifts same wey.

Warren: I see. So, you want to propose to the special lady in your life. Now, this piece has some visible flaws and some minor inclusions that dim its brilliance, but um you would probably get about $800 US for it normally. But, your brother has given me a lot of business in the past, so let me see what I can do for you. It will take me about tree weeks to convert this from a bracelet to a ring and earrings. Why don’t you take a look around at my other items, and I will let you exchange the bracelet for something already made. You can shop at around $950 to $1000 US because we are like family.

Delmar: Eeehhnnn? Yuh tek mi fe wan bloodcl** eediat ar whaa? Mi knoa de bracelet worth at least $2500 US! Mi grandauntie his wan Irish white oomans live ah England! Har neva cheap hup harself star! Nuff time be show har some washova gole chain mi wan and har tell mi everyting ah glitta nuh gole. Why coolie dem always so tief? Mi should bun dung yuh rhaatid shop star!

*he snatches the bracelet back and storms out the store.

Delmar is running out of time, he has to find a way to impress Mya and make sure she doesn’t forget him when she goes back to the States. He is sure that her womb is full of his seed, but he needs more insurance.*

[jawi876 2]

OMG Jawi! Let me say congratulations on a wonderful story! I am so hooked! I agree with everyone that you should definitely publish! I sat here and read the whole story today! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I'm glad you joined us NowMrs. Thanks, and enjoy the ride!

OMG Jawi! Let me say congratulations on a wonderful story! I am so hooked! I agree with everyone that you should definitely publish! I sat here and read the whole story today! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I AGREE!!!

Thank you again!

[jawi876 2]

Read the last installment for the night after the kiddies are safely tucked into bed!!! Ready? Here goes:

Mya runs to the elevator, and only slows to catch her breath as the elevator heads to the fifth floor. She can’t wait to see her Rasta again. She has hardly thought of Tran the entire day. The only time she gave him a thought was when Toya mentioned the wedding, and him escorting her. She knew that she would have to stick with those plans to keep from ruining her girl’s special day. Mya also knew that she would have to tell Rasta about the wedding, and the fact that she made plans with his brother before they got involved. She hoped that he would get jealous enough to show her some of the anger he had shown Toya, but not enough to leave her.

When she put the keycard in the door, she could hear the reggae music and smell the ganja in the hallway. Mya quickly closed the door behind herself, and placed the food on the small table in the foyer. She looked around for Tradee, and guessed that he was in the Jacuzzi again.

Mya smiles to herself, and strips out of her clothes. She walks slowly and sensuously into the bathroom. She stands in the doorway with her legs spread-eagle, and her hands on her hips.

Tradee licks his lips lustfully. Mya goes to the glass encased shower, and turns it on. She leaves the door ajar so that Tradee can continue to watch her from his vantage point. He continues to squint through the ganja smoke, and reclines in the Jacuzzi for her special show. Mya begins to lather her body, and she allows her hands to roam freely over every inch of her body. She never lets her eyes stray from his, and she is driving herself crazy with pleasure. The sexual chemistry between the two is emanating throughout the steam-filled room. After she finishes soaping herself down, she allows the handheld shower head to move over her curves. The water cascades and trickles from her head, down her breasts, over her navel and between the valley created by her thighs. Mya brings herself to climax under Tradee’s watchful eye. Tradee smiles in acknowledgement of her skillful art of seduction. He can feel his member become engorged. When he stands to join her, Mya wags a finger at him. She silently tells him to stay put. Mya saunters over to him and begins to wash his body, deliberately lingering on each of his erogenous zones. When he reaches out for her, she moves back out of his reach. When she returns, she offers him only her tongue. He groans inwardly from the mental restraint.

Mya begins walking away from him, and she glances over her shoulder at him. She slowly bends over from the waist, and allows him to glimpse some of her moves as an exotic dancer. When she thinks he is about to explode, she challenges him.*

Mya: You aren’t man enough to handle all of this! Your brother knew how to handle all this pu***! You would probably lose your mind little boy! If you are a man, come and take it! Show me how much you can hurt me Rasta!

*Tradee stalks over to her quickly. He grabs her by her throat and squeezes, and her breathing catches in her throat as he pushes her into the wall. Mya’s eyes begin to bulge from the steady pressure of his hand on her throat. She begins to pull at his hand, trying to free her breathing. Tradee removes his hand because his intent was not to really choke or hurt her, but to play along with her game. While her back is still against the wall, he lifts her high above him. Mya’s body slides back down the wall slowly, and he enters her roughly. She tips her pelvis to meet his greedy thrusts. He is grunting through gritted teeth, and making her take every inch of him. She is powerless to escape his sweet assault. Their hands are still intertwined high above their heads, seeking more closeness.

Mya’s legs unwrap from his waist, and she balances on her toes in a futile effort to keep them joined. Tradee pulls her left leg up and over his shoulder as he continues to circle around and around, disappearing in and out of her warmth. Mya points her toes, and stretches her standing split as far as she can take it by pulling on her left ankle. Tradee bites her left calf muscle to keep from screaming out, and leaves a huge purplish mark from his forceful sucking motion. He grabs her other leg up and lets both rest over his strong forearms as he sinks deeper and deeper into her depths. Mya’s legs are now at a 45 degree angle around Tradee’s muscular frame. Mya is chanting her undying love for him in between his benevolent kisses. Her lips are full and plump from the constant onslaught of his mouth. Mya’s nails etch deep furrows across the Rasta’s once smooth back. She returns his bites of passion with her own vigorous bites, and his brown skin darkens from the intensity of her desire. Tradee’s movements become awkward and purpose driven, as he spills his seed. His loud bellows can be heard all over the hotel as he impregnates her waiting womb. Mya is not finished, so she drops to the floor with him and straddles his lap. They never loose their connection. In her mind, she is riding bareback over meadows and fields, sailing over barriers and mountain tops. Tradee grabs a fistful of hair and pulls her back into an arch. He sits up and leaves a trail of passion bites all over her neck and breasts. His sweaty biceps encircle her waist, and he uses sheer strength to pull and rock her to ecstasy. They ride together until they crash into the unknown, drowning in comments of love and passion. Both lovers fall asleep in each other’s arms, with Tradee still holding a fist of her hair in his hand, and her bottom lip nestled safely between his own.*

[classychic77 0]

More!!!! This is better than anything on tv.

[Dwarf_Ogress 0]

Oh my, is it getting warm in here?

*pant-pant*

Oh my darling husband is soooo in trouble tonight!

[Sonshyne 2]

Oh my, is it getting warm in here?

*pant-pant*

Oh my darling husband is soooo in trouble tonight!

DAYUMMMM!!! That was definatly some hot after hours reading! Mthink I need a fiyah extingsher. Jawi mi tink mi husband be ready fi pay yuh soon

[Sonshyne 2]

Mya got lost in the heat of the moment did she forget that she has those modeling gigs lined up for her?? How is she gonna do that with all those passion marks every where?? What do you think Tran is gonna think when he see's both of them all scratched and bit up?? He's already trying to put 1+1 together.... Mi tink some body gonna get chop up with

machete

Edited October 31, 2007 by Sonshyne

[Sonshyne 2]

Oh my, is it getting warm in here?

*pant-pant*

Oh my darling husband is soooo in trouble tonight!

Mine too