My name ain't Stella....

[Sonshyne 2]

Mya: Just tell me one thing. You never answered my question earlier. Did you sleep with Tradee? It doesn’t matter! Just answer the question Toya! Damnit!

Sooo that was the problem??? She gonna have bigger problems than that!! Wait till her belly blow up and she can't model or tell you who her baby daddy is

Guess what pretty little model girl? The world does not revolve around you!

I guess Toya is finally seeing that Mya think her Sh** don't stink

Give me a break...Mya just because he didn't sleep with Toya doesn't mean you are free and clear. You met the guy YESTERDAY - I would be more worried about what he has. Don't breathe that sigh of relief just yet

Lawd I am getting way too attached to these characters

Me too

Ditto

[morantbaygirl 0]

Jawi I am in awe of your passion !!! Can't wait hurry hurry hurry. Frizt's is my heroe but i'm still thinkin somethings not quite right with him.

[brownnskinn 0]

I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)

remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here.......

I'm confused, and I'm the author. LOL

Lawd !!

[brownnskinn 0]

...there are plenty.

[brownnskinn 0]

Look ow oonu love fe punish Mya...poor misunderstood Mya. LOL

Mi nuh kno if Mya a guh mek it!!! Wid all dat screaming and carrying on she a duh...Evil Tradee may start fi cyatch flashback or prison fi deh 'rape' han done Mya one time!! Cause 'im Naaaaaah guh back a prison...plus Toya done tink she see Tran inna deh elevator, suh 'im wouldda get blame fi deh murdah! Bam bam Tradee git him revenge and evil Tradee move on tuh the next victim...oonuh stay dere...all dat screaming a guh bring it outta him!

-Gill

ahhhaa..only u

No don't sehdat. i don't like dat ending

[brownnskinn 0]

Jr: Mi nuh wan har! Mi wan fe mi hown modda! Har gwaan like wan duppy, shake and fret! Why mi neva meet har til now Daddy? Mi neva bring wan gyal pickney home and tell yuh sey har ah yuh new daughta. *Begins to bawl out for Me-Ma loudly*

you all leave teh child alone, he is only 4 years old, it is very sadddddddddddddddddddd

but him bright nuh backfoot........you can teel the pickney dem wah live wid dem granny :lo: :lol:

Di pickney need fi know him place my girl! Chat bout what him waan - *kissteet* mek granny gi him wan bax an tell him fi siddung

Likkle pickney Fitz chatting like a big man

cause him daddy probably told him wha to seh

[brownnskinn 0]

Mya: I’m infected. Oh God! I’m infected!...Help me! Why God? Why?

How she ago bawl out to di Lawd - chat bout WHY and she a fornicate! *kissteet* you stop whoring around and you don't have to worry about infection!

Yall got mi cracking Up Jawi the story gwaan good naw please don't stop...rest if you have to but, we will be anxiously waiting.

Great JOB!!!!!!!

[phatmadame81 0]

Jr: Mi nuh wan har! Mi wan fe mi hown modda! Har gwaan like wan duppy, shake and fret! Why mi neva meet har til now Daddy? Mi neva bring wan gyal pickney home and tell yuh sey har ah yuh new daughta. *Begins to bawl out for Me-Ma loudly*

you all leave teh child alone, he is only 4 years old, it is very sadddddddddddddddddddd

but him bright nuh backfoot........you can teel the pickney dem wah live wid dem granny :lo: :lol:

Di pickney need fi know him place my girl! Chat bout what him waan - *kissteet* mek granny gi him wan bax an tell him fi siddung

Likkle pickney Fitz chatting like a big man

cause him daddy probably told him wha to seh

[jawi876 2]

Delmar: What? What do you mean you can’t see me anymore? I can slow things down Mya. Please don’t do this. Okay. Okay. We can do some tourist things, we can go to some clubs and just have a good time okay. I’m not asking you to marry me Rasscl** fool fool bwoy mess hup mi game plan! Now de gyal spook like duppy sit pon mi headtop! Mi ago have fe low de plan, and wait huntil har reach back a farrin. Bumbocl**! All I’m asking for is more time to get to know you. I will be going back to work tomorrow. So, I can only see you at night anyway.

Mya: What? Oh my goodness Tran! I forgot all about your job. Are you in trouble for today? I still need time Tran to sort through my emotions. I am not normally joined to the hip of some man. Maybe you can give me a few days alone? I would like you to accompany me to the wedding though. I am used to having my independence. Look Toya wants me to talk to Tradee for her. She thinks I can break the news of her wedding to him better. Can you give me his number? Great. Now, I have to figure out how to do this without hurting him too much. Do you think he will take it hard? Was he dating anyone else? Someone that could take his mind off of Toya? No, I don’t think you should do it. His pride may be hurt coming from his brother. You know the male ego.

Tran: No, I stopped by there earlier. Everything is good. I guess I can take care of some things at home for a couple of days. You think she will really get married? Don’t you think she should talk to Tradee herself? My brother is a loner. I don’t think he will be too broken up by it. Yeah, his number is 111-2222. You really don’t have to talk to him about it. It’s not like he will try to end his life over a woman he just met. They didn’t even sleep together. My brother has enough women to keep him busy. I will talk to him…no worries. Okay. If you insist.

Mya: Give me those lips baby. You know I’m going to miss you and the big bamboo though. I will call you as soon as I get some semblance of sanity back. I’m just going to hang out on the beach tomorrow. Do some shopping with Toya…you know do the girl thing. Baby my womb can’t take another beating today. I need to rejuvenate. Don’t you like it tight and warm? Well, I need time to pamper her. Please understand, and stop pouting Tran baby. You are so sexy. Good night baby. I’ll call you soon.

Tran: *kisses Mya with the inside of his lips like she taught him* Mi ago miss yuh pums fe tru. Mi neva feel a pums so warm. I know. Okay. What are you going to do while I’m gone? Let mi feel yuh wrap around mi agen before mi go. Yeah. Yuh ago mek ie sweet fe mi? Alright. Lata mi gyal. Nuh mek mi wait tuh lang nuh.

*They kiss and walk to the door. Mya watches him walk to the elevator and disappear.*

[jawi876 2]

Mya: Sh**! I thought he would never leave. Now, how do I convince Tradee to come back over? I need some labor intensive loving. I don’t want to fall in love right now. We only need one of us with our heads in the clouds. Damn!

*Mya runs to the phone and dials the front desk.*

Mya: Hi, this is room 55. Yes. Thank you for delivering the note. Can you tell me what’s happening on Tuesday nights in Ocho Rios? Ocean’s 11…Karaoke? Okay great. Thanks. No, that’s all. Good night.

Hello? Rasta? Hi, it’s me Mya. Yes. Toya’s friend. I need to talk to you. I need to talk to you tonight. I promise not to take too much time. I don’t want to go into a lot of detail over the phone, but I need you…um I mean I need to see you. Can you meet me at Ocean’s 11 at around 12:30 AM? No. I will be alone. Tran told me that he had to get home because he had an early day tomorrow for work. Toya can’t make it. I have to get out before I go crazy. I figured I could ask you so I wouldn’t have to worry about shooing men off all night. You promise? You will come? Great! See you then Tradee.

[Yaads 0]

Mya: Give me those lips baby. You know I’m going to miss you and the big bamboo though. I will call you as soon as I get some semblance of sanity back. I’m just going to hang out on the beach tomorrow. Do some shopping with Toya…you know do the girl thing. Baby my womb can’t take another beating today. I need to rejuvenate. Don’t you like it tight and warm? Well, I need time to pamper her. Please understand, and stop pouting Tran baby. You are so sexy. Good night baby. I’ll call you soon.

My vocab is really improving with this story

Might I add that the last installment continues to prove Mya is the skettle we all thing she is!

[brownnskinn 0]

Mya done fell in luv

[Forever Young 1]

Mya: Give me those lips baby. You know I’m going to miss you and the big bamboo though. I will call you as soon as I get some semblance of sanity back. I’m just going to hang out on the beach tomorrow. Do some shopping with Toya…you know do the girl thing. Baby my womb can’t take another beating today. I need to rejuvenate. Don’t you like it tight and warm? Well, I need time to pamper her. Please understand, and stop pouting Tran baby. You are so sexy. Good night baby. I’ll call you soon.

My vocab is really improving with this story

Might I add that the last installment continues to prove Mya is the skettle we all thing she is!

Ummmmm Mmmmmm, Bwoy, mi nuh hondastan or ovastan dat gyal atall!! Fi real, how deh rassss is she still walking wid all dat 'Love & affection'. If there was a rooking olympics Mya wouldda git gold, silver & bronze medal...fi sure!

Lovin' it Jawi, mi luv, keep up deh good wuk!!!

Mya jump up ready fi guh again -( No Mya, I said 'Good Wuk', not "HOT WUK"...calm dung gyal )

, Gill

Edited October 30, 2007 by Deyoungting

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Di amount a beat dat deh womb tek...mi wonder if it no drop yet...damn skets..watch how she a go fall in love wid Tradee ..hmmm....and the plot thickens

[Jonesie 1]

How the phone number 111-2222?

Glad you're back - I was about to go on youtube.com because I'm so bored