My name ain't Stella....

[phatmadame81 0]

lawd god.............

Delmar............you sure seh Mel just left ina hurry????????????????

[Yaads 0]

Dat a mek Tradee really jump offa a cliff..hehee...it a go mad..afta 'im finally a tell himself him can love..she gone go marry smaddy else...whoaiii...Tradee whatever u do, don't commit suicide..i beg u

I hear ya! Poor Tradee...Melodee seems to be the only one left for him to love.

Wonder if he will go for the sex from Mya she so seemed to want (bed both twins comment)...Don't do it Tradee! All we need is a Maury show paternity test results that come back inconclusive because Mya was with identical twins and became pregnant Identical twins = same DNA...can't tell paternity.

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Dat a mek Tradee really jump offa a cliff..hehee...it a go mad..afta 'im finally a tell himself him can love..she gone go marry smaddy else...whoaiii...Tradee whatever u do, don't commit suicide..i beg u

I hear ya! Poor Tradee...Melodee seems to be the only one left for him to love.

Wonder if he will go for the sex from Mya she so seemed to want (bed both twins comment)...Don't do it Tradee! All we need is a Maury show paternity test results that come back inconclusive because Mya was with identical twins and became pregnant Identical twins = same DNA...can't tell paternity.

Hahaa..Tran woulda claim it cause 'im wan't off the Island,...and a free ride to farin..hheeee

[brownnskinn 0]

Mya would just have an abortion if she is preggers...sorry Tran...no green card for you

She sure would.

[morantbaygirl 0]

Spent the whole weekend reading all 21 pages. Girl you have untapped talent that you need to explore!!!! I read novels usually two a week. I can't wait untill you write again. Ladies you can keep your popcorn I'm having beer and Nachos!!

GIRL JUST KEEP WRITING.

[jawi876 2]

*Toya remembers that she has left Fitz in the lobby, and runs down to check on him. He is immediately concerned when he notices her ruined make-up and puffy eyes.*

Toya: I’m so sorry baby. I got caught up talking to Mya about our wedding plans. No, I’m fine sweetie. You know how emotional women can get when they start talking about weddings and love. Look, I’m still not packed yet. I’m going to pay for you to stay with me here tonight if that’s okay? Oh. I’m sorry. I forgot about little Fitz Jr. Okay, let me grab a few things, and we can come back later to get the rest.

Fitz: It’s okay, as long as you are fine. I can’t stay puttus, I have to pick up Jr. from my granny’s. He is probably wondering where I am now. If you want to stay, I can pick you up tomorrow. Alright. Hurry back okay. I love you.

Toya: I love you too. *Toya kisses Fitz passionately, and heads back to her room to grab an overnight bag. Fitz heads over to the gift shop to browse around.*

*Tradee walks into the lobby just in time to see Toya kissing the yoga guy from this morning. They are kissing as passionately as she kissed him last night. Will he ever learn that he can’t trust women? Why was he never enough? Did she just tell him that she loved him? Too? So, they were exchanging vows of love already? Tradee was fuming on the inside. He would get his vengeance on his brother, Melodee and now Toya. Yoga bwoy should consider himself a dead man.*

[phatmadame81 0]

I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)

remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here.......

[jawi876 2]

I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)

remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here.......

I'm confused, and I'm the author. LOL

[phatmadame81 0]

*Toya remembers that she has left Fitz in the lobby, and runs down to check on him. He is immediately concerned when he notices her ruined make-up and puffy eyes.*

Toya: I’m so sorry baby. I got caught up talking to Mya about our wedding plans. No, I’m fine sweetie. You know how emotional women can get when they start talking about weddings and love. Look, I’m still not packed yet. I’m going to pay for you to stay with me here tonight if that’s okay? Oh. I’m sorry. I forgot about little Fitz Jr. Okay, let me grab a few things, and we can come back later to get the rest.

Fitz: It’s okay, as long as you are fine. I can’t stay puttus, I have to pick up Jr. from my granny’s. He is probably wondering where I am now. If you want to stay, I can pick you up tomorrow. Alright. Hurry back okay. I love you.

Toya: I love you too. *Toya kisses Fitz passionately, and heads back to her room to grab an overnight bag. Fitz heads over to the gift shop to browse around.*

*Tradee walks into the lobby just in time to see Toya kissing the yoga guy from this morning. They are kissing as passionately as she kissed him last night. Will he ever learn that he can’t trust women? Why was he never enough? Did she just tell him that she loved him? Too? So, they were exchanging vows of love already? Tradee was fuming on the inside. He would get his vengeance on his brother, Melodee and now Toya. Yoga bwoy should consider himself a dead man.*

you caan stop there

how is he gonna get teh revenge

dyum

Tradee catch Toya A Fitz....serves him right anyways Toya was never his in the first place.....typical man fi belive sey di woman a fi him own .

[jawi876 2]

Front desk staff: Excuse me Mr. Sims. Sir, your wife has been expecting you back all day. She asked us to give you this message, and said that you would understand it perfectly.

Tradee: Yes? A message for me? Thank you kindly. Good eveling and good night. *Tradee opens the handwritten note obviously meant for his brother, and smiles to himself. It is a note full of unspoken promises and fantasies. A note meant for a lover. Luckily, the woman at the front desk had scribbled the room number in the bottom corner of the envelope. Tradee made a quick stop in the men’s restroom on the main floor. When he reappeared, his turban was gone. His locks cascaded softly around his waist. He is still carrying the bouquet of flowers that he picked for Toya.*

[phatmadame81 0]

I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)

remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here.......

I'm confused, and I'm the author. LOL

Sorry screwed up the names.........

what I meant to say was........

Maybe Mya (yes that is the right one) might come out to be the good girl.......find out she is preggers and keep the baby (yeah I know she was saying it was no good for her career and what not but things change) She could hook up with Tradee and they fall in love ....for real get married and he get to go to farrin wishful thinking .........

srry if I confused you'll

[SupportOAFJF 0]

sEE..MI TELL OONU SEy Tradee a go mad..se 'im a plot fi poor Fitz..u see how dem dyam hotel ppl can get smaddy inna trouble..did Tradee ask 'im fi nuttin or seh nuttin to 'im..bout 'im wife lef note..kissteet...look dem a go mek Tradee sleep wid Mya cause she a go tink seh a Tran...woaii..where is the res puttus....come on, mi caan wait

[phatmadame81 0]

Front desk staff: Excuse me Mr. Sims. Sir, your wife has been expecting you back all day. She asked us to give you this message, and said that you would understand it perfectly.

Tradee: Yes? A message for me? Thank you kindly. Good eveling and good night. *Tradee opens the handwritten note obviously meant for his brother, and smiles to himself. It is a note full of unspoken promises and fantasies. A note meant for a lover. Luckily, the woman at the front desk had scribbled the room number in the bottom corner of the envelope. Tradee made a quick stop in the men’s restroom on the main floor. When he reappeared, his turban was gone. His locks cascaded softly around his waist. He is still carrying the bouquet of flowers that he picked for Toya.*

Mi get confuse know,

Delmar.rasta ,.Tran..what is his name.............. he is married to who it is not Mel ?

His he pretendoing to be married to Mya ?

tradee is gonna go to the room pretending to be him.this is gonna get hot....

Iam going on lunch break.

[Sonshyne 2]

Front desk staff: Excuse me Mr. Sims. Sir, your wife has been expecting you back all day. She asked us to give you this message, and said that you would understand it perfectly.

Tradee: Yes? A message for me? Thank you kindly. Good eveling and good night. *Tradee opens the handwritten note obviously meant for his brother, and smiles to himself. It is a note full of unspoken promises and fantasies. A note meant for a lover. Luckily, the woman at the front desk had scribbled the room number in the bottom corner of the envelope. Tradee made a quick stop in the men’s restroom on the main floor. When he reappeared, his turban was gone. His locks cascaded softly around his waist. He is still carrying the bouquet of flowers that he picked for Toya.*

Aaahhhh SNAPS!! Tradee is gonna go in the suite act like he's Tran ... Well she said she wanted them both. Looks like she's gonna get just that!!

Edited October 29, 2007 by Sonshyne

[Yaads 0]

Oh no

They might as well start a commune Everybody sleeping with everybody...they can all just sleep together and not worry about it.

Tradee...come on man...we hated you and then you bared your soul and we liked you...now you are turning evil again. Just go back to the airport and find someone else...there are plenty.

Edited October 29, 2007 by Yardiewife