My name ain't Stella....

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awww Fitz

SWOOOOOOOON

I know...I'm leaving my husband to go find Fitz

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Something aint right w/Fitz.....deep down I think he has a secret of his own.

True. somthing aint right.

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Hold on here!!!

Mi too

Mi fi try tonight

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Jawi I'll be keeping you in my prayers, hope you feel better soon

Ditto!!!

[jamerican 2]

Scrap the idea of a book....I heard a song today that made me immediatly think of this as a screenplay. OK, first song for the soundtrack is Kymani Marley's song SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH A RASTA. I automatically thought of this story...

Check out the link to the song....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkg3rwUsDq0

Oh and to play fitz I think Kymani would be perfect

[jawi876 2]

Scrap the idea of a book....I heard a song today that made me immediatly think of this as a screenplay. OK, first song for the soundtrack is Kymani Marley's song SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH A RASTA. I automatically thought of this story...

Check out the link to the song....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkg3rwUsDq0

Oh and to play fitz I think Kymani would be perfect

Lol...Ky-mani is playing the part of Delmar (Tran) and Tradee (Rasta). Kiprich is playing the part of Fitz. How you gone come up in here and rearrange my vision? LOL...just joking!

[jawi876 2]

Are you ready for some more? BTW, please remember my request not to duplicate my work on another website without getting my expressed written permission. Here goes:

Fitz: Baby, I-I l-love you, and I promise to never stop loving you. I have a beautiful home and so much more love to give you. Ms. Toya Marie Richardson, will you marry me? Promise that you will not leave me. You don’t need to return to him. I will die fulfilling your every desire.

Toya: I-I-I. I don’t know what to…YES! Fitzroy Nevis Davidson, I would be honored to marry you. I can’t wait to become Mrs. Fitz Davidson! How soon can we marry?

[jawi876 2]

*Mya and Tran had sand in crevices they never knew they had. After they christened the lifeguard tower, they decided to head to the hotel to rest. Mya argued with the front desk staff because they didn’t want Tran on the property. They stated that the hotel did not condone prostitution, whether female or male. She screamed loudly about disputing her credit card charges, and finding another hotel. She asked the idiots if she really looked like she had to pay for the company of any man. The office manager finally conceded, and processed him in as a guest for the remaining eight nights. He was so outdone by her loud vulgarities, and the impression the other guests might get of him, that he offered them an additional suite next to hers and Toya’s suite. She only had to pay the price for a third guest sharing the first suite.

They had ordered room service, and showered together. After they devoured their food the same way they devoured each other, they lay spent on the king sized poster bed. Mya hoped that Toya would not require her company today. She was exhausted, but thoroughly sated. The only plans she had for the afternoon involved sleep, sleep and more sleep.

Tran could not rest because of his unfinished business that loomed in the air. He tossed and turned, and wondered how he would explain his absence to Melodee. His original plan had taken an unfortunate turn. He never equated feelings in his plan, and in his mind’s eye it was foolproof. Tran hated that he loved women so much. He loved everything about them. He speculated that he would always be soft for a tight body and pretty face. He knew that if he didn’t find a way to distract himself from the powerful emotions he was developing for Mya, he would slip up and make a foolish mistake.

He decided to just follow the ride, and work out the rest as it came. Tran cleared his mind, and drifted off to sleep. He dreamed that Mya was carrying his baby, and she didn’t know how she would manage without him. She wanted him to come and live in the US with her and their baby. He had to get out of Jamaica, there just had to be more out there for him.

Mya awoke in a cold sweat , just as the sun was fading into dusk. She had a nightmare that she was pregnant, and didn’t know the identity of the father. Mya knew that she couldn’t afford a pregnancy, and was glad that she insisted on protection every time she had sexual relations with a man. Her modeling career was lucrative because she kept her body at the peak of performance. Carrying a baby would ruin her near perfect figure, and bring her career momentum to a stand still. A lot of women, including Toya, wanted to know how she kept her body so perfect. She would never tell them that her secret involved getting as much d*** as she could every day. She burned more calories doing something she loved, and she loved D***!

She watched Tran sleeping next to her, and wondered if she could truly commit herself to one man. What would she do when he had to work, and she couldn’t be with him when she needed it? She had been pushing back fantasies to bed both twins before the trip ended. It would take some maneuvering on her part, but she was sure she could convince them to go along with her fantasy. Mya knew that if she was honest with herself, Tran had outstayed his welcome. She was no longer intrigued by his maleness. She needed a man that could withstand her loving without getting caught up. Tran wasn’t it. Maybe, Tradee could handle her no strings attached love. Her body began to react to her memory of Tradee watching her on the beach. She looked at Tran, and decided not to wake him. She could handle this session on her own. Mya, pulled her trusted standby from her luggage and headed to the shower.

Edited October 29, 2007 by jawi876

[Forever Young 1]

Bwoy Mya is insatiable!!! Poor Tran a guh have a real problem when him return to Melodee fi SURE!!!!

,

Gill

[jawi876 2]

Good Morning baby girl. I see you are patiently waiting for more. I guess it's just me and you this morning huh? (((((Gill)))))

[jawi876 2]

*Tradee felt renewed, like he had been given a second chance for life and love. He knew that he would never love or respect Melodee again. She had taken his love and tried to ruin him because of it. He tried to remember that his twin didn’t know about his sordid past with Melodee, but something inside still wanted vengeance. But how could he exact his vengeance on his brother and convince Toya that he was not an animal? Tradee decided to work on Toya first, his brother would come in time. As he left his yard, he began selecting the most exotic tropical flowers he could find to present to his exotic Empress.* Edited October 29, 2007 by jawi876

[jawi876 2]

*Toya and Fitz packed up their things, and headed back to the hotel. Toya could not wait to tell Mya about her and Fitz. She also wanted to start planning her upcoming nuptials as soon as possible. Toya knew that Mya would think she was acting to quickly, but would have her back no matter what. How would she tell Mya that she was moving her things to Fitz’s place, and that she would not be going back to the States right away? There was so much that needed to be done in a short amount of time. She wanted Mya to stand beside her on the most important day of her life. Fitz told her that he would take her and Mya into town to shop for her dress and veil tomorrow.

Toya jumped from the car and ran inside the hotel. Fitz laughed at her enthusiasm, and told her that he would wait for her in the lobby. She rushed into the room, and immediately wondered where all of Mya’s things were.*

Toya: Mya? Mya? Where are you? Where could she be, I haven’t seen her since I left the beach this morning. Oh Dear God! Please let her be okay! Mya! I should have called you. I should have tried to check on you. How selfish of me to only think of myself? *Toya rushes to the phone to call the front desk.* Hello? Um, yes this is room 56, and I um. Have you seen or heard from my roommate, Mya Summers, today? Yes, yes, that’s her. Oh! She did? So, she is checked in next door to me? Okay. Room 55. Okay, thanks. You too. No, there is nothing else at this time. I will. Thanks again. Good bye.

*Toya breathes an audible sigh of relief and runs to room 55. She knocks on the door and waits for a response.*

Mya: Tran. How many times do I have to tell you to use the keycard like I’ve shown you. You are a guest. You do not need to knock. Damn…*She snatches the door open in irritation.* Toya? Hey T? Where did you disappear to this morning? Come in. I guess the front desk told you I relocated huh?

Toya: Why didn’t you call me, or leave a note or something? Do you know how worried I got when I didn’t see your things in the room? I thought that Tran did something to upset you, and you jumped on the first thing headed back home.

Mya: Girl no! That fool is running around the hotel somewhere. He told me that he needed to run out for a minute and he would be back. I just hope he brings me back some real jerk chicken. The food in this hotel is too damn American for me. If I wanted barbeque chicken, I could have stayed home. All this damn sexing has me tired and hungry! T, that man is insatiable. His nose is open girl. If only he had some money, I would be in love! Haa-haa.

Toya: Well, I have some news to tell you. I need you to sit down for a minute, and listen to me. Please, it’s important.

Mya: Huh? What? Why are you all serious and sh**? What happened to you anyway? You never answered the question.

Edited October 29, 2007 by jawi876

[jamerican 2]

Scrap the idea of a book....I heard a song today that made me immediatly think of this as a screenplay. OK, first song for the soundtrack is Kymani Marley's song SHE FELL IN LOVE WITH A RASTA. I automatically thought of this story...

Check out the link to the song....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkg3rwUsDq0

Oh and to play fitz I think Kymani would be perfect

Lol...Ky-mani is playing the part of Delmar (Tran) and Tradee (Rasta). Kiprich is playing the part of Fitz. How you gone come up in here and rearrange my vision? LOL...just joking!

Please forgive me girl...It is just wild hearing that song and getting a visual of your story...Fa real...and after that water scene....whooooa...just wishing it was Ky-mani!!!!

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desire.

Toya: I-I-I. I don’t know what to…YES! Fitzroy Nevis Davidson, I would be honored to marry you. I can’t wait to become Mrs. Fitz Davidson! How soon can we marry?

Oh lord! How can she be so stupid!!

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Jawi girl, thank you, thank you, thank you. I had a boring weekend and waited with bated breath to continue reading this story. You are making my day.