My name ain't Stella....

[jawi876 2]

I was beginning to think nobody was interested....

[Sonshyne 2]

Come Jawi gyal post some more of this story, yuh know wi interested

Edited October 22, 2007 by Sonshyne

[jawi876 2]

Delmar: *Chuckling huskily* Slow down baby. This is destiny. You feel it too, don’t you? I have been waiting, praying, and dreaming all of my days about finding a woman like you. My heart stopped when I looked up because my dreams and prayers had finally been answered today. Our heavenly Father up above sent me my angel today. Today is indeed a bless-ed day!

*He leans in until he can feel her breath catch in her throat, and to witness the erratic rhythm of her heartbeat at the hollow in her neck. Mya briefly closes her eyes, she moves instinctively closer to him as if drawn by an invisible magnetic field.*

Mya: Uh..huh. Hmmm…umm. What? *her eyes pop back open and she tries to refocus on his eyes instead of his lips. She lets out a ragged breath and wonders if he knows just what he is doing to her.* Whew. Tran...Tyrone…Trevor…whatever your real name is, I don’t know what we are doing here. But, I don’t know you from gate. I’m not accustomed to being so forward with a man I just met. I hope he can’t tell I’m lying. You could be a serial rapist or mass murde…

*Delmar leans in and takes her parted lips into his greedily. He is gentle in his delivery but his kiss is all-encompassing. He plans on making her his right now…and he is racing against the clock. Soon, someone will need to use this restroom, although it is the most obscure one in the airport. He worries about getting caught because his job is at stake, but he silently hopes it won’t matter much longer anyway. He pulls her body in closer still and groans inwardly at the feel of her firm behind in his palms.*

Mya: …derer…or something. Wh-what was that? Aw he** girl, you are on vacation. You came here for a little fun. I don’t know how Toya manages to stay with one man so long. What happens in Jamaica stays in Jamaica. Good thing you carry protection in your purse. Ain’t nothing to it but to do it.

Sooooo, I’m your personal angel sent from up above huh? You want me to show you what your little angel is made of? Yeah…baby…I’m sugar and spice…annnddd everything nice…My moment of stage fright is over!

[Jonesie 1]

I believed it all the way till the nice guy in customs part.

When I go thru Customs and there is a male at the counter I get nothing but smiles and niceness - and this has been every time to date I made it a point to go to a counter where there was a male. Not to say that all of the women were rude, but during my first two trips I had my share of attitude from them and it didn't take long to change my direction in lines from women to men.

[Jonesie 1]

*Mya’s admirer has the finely tuned body of an Olympic swimmer…not too bulky and not too slender. His airport uniform hugs and caresses his bulging biceps and rock hard thighs. His skin is the color of the famed Jamaican Appleton rum and just as smooth. His dreads are immaculate and freshly twisted at the roots. His dreads are in a tight ponytail that reaches just past his waistline. He has full plump lips and eyelashes that would make any woman jealous. His Jamaican-Irish bloodline has given him a very exotic look.*

Mya: So, what’s up with the locked door? Dude you are so not ready for all of Mya! What’s your name again?

Delmar: Mi juss wan yuh tuh mi self fe a likkle while. My gyal yuh sweet tuh rass! Mi name is Travis…but dem call mi Tran.

Mya: Huh? What did you say? Can you slow down a little? I didn’t understand what you just said.

Delmar: I’m sorry beautiful Mya. I said that you stole my heart with the first glimmer of your pretty smile. You can call me Tran. Is this your first trip to Jamaica?

Mya: Oh. Thanks. *blushing and smiling wider* I…I have to get back to my friend now we are headed to Ocho Rios and we have a limo driver waiting on us this is our first trip to Jamaica and we are so excited when I saw you I thought you were so handsome and ff- fine I hope you use the numbers on the card I…I…I would love to get to know you better but I’m not looking for a long distance relationship or anything how often do you get to the USA? My name is Mya by the way, and this is my first trip to Jamaica. Mya be cool girl. He will not be the last attractive man you meet in Jamaica. Don’t let him see how much he is turning you on. Why is this man affecting me like this so quickly?

*Delmar knows all to well that Mya is feeling him and will be easy prey. He saunters slowly over to her, glances over his shoulder to double check the lock on the door and stands as close as he can to her without physically touching. He tentatively allows the back of his palm to softly touch the side of her face and lowers his voice seductively*

LOL @ the translation from patwa to "proper" English...as Beres Hammond says, sweet lies

[jawi876 2]

*Foreplay is short and sweet because they were both on a mission. Their clothes are haphazardly discarded in their haste to merge as one. Delmar pins her against the wall as they greedily consume each other. He slowly palms the unused condom into his pocket.*

Delmar: Rassclaat!!! Mi cyan believe dis gyal give mi a bly so quick. Mi knoa mi lyrics sweet har. Mi have plans fey uh sweet likkle Mya. Mi nuh dun yuh yet mi gyal. Mi have fe breed yuh Mya babes. Gawd he-heellllp mi…mi ago breed har.

* Then, he bends her over one of the sinks and turns on the faucet. He begins using his hands to slowly trickle water on her back. He knows a lot of women like backshot, and he aims to please. Her skin is blazing…he has never felt so much internal flame in a woman before. He begins to lick the quickly evaporating droplets from her skin. He is enjoys the looks of pure rapture on her face through the mirror. She turns her head to look over her shoulder, and he kisses her with wild abandon. She is amazed that with all her prior experience she has never been so turned on by another man before.*

Female voice: Hello? Hello? Is there anyone in there? Hello? Bang. Bang. Bang

To be continued…

I guess I will stop posting now. *Disclaimer* This story is purely fictional, and I am writing it as I go. If you guys don't like it let me know...if you want me to stop, let me know. All comments are welcome. This is my first attempt at writing, so bare with me.

Edited October 22, 2007 by jawi876

[Forever Young 1]

Mek mi get di papcawn an ting...hurry up noh man!

FI REAL..mi waan some popcawn tuh...nuh bodda fi hog it up Jonesie!...munch munch pass please.. this is good...

Bless,

Gill

[nyseness 0]

Yea that IS good.

[Forever Young 1]

*Foreplay is short and sweet because they were both on a mission. Their clothes are haphazardly discarded in their haste to merge as one. Delmar pins her against the wall as they greedily consume each other. He slowly palms the unused condom into his pocket.*

Delmar: Rassclaat!!! Mi cyan believe dis gyal give mi a bly so quick. Mi knoa mi lyrics sweet har. Mi have plans fey uh sweet likkle Mya. Mi nuh dun yuh yet mi gyal. Mi have fe breed yuh Mya babes. Gawd he-heellllp mi…mi ago breed har.

* Then, he bends her over one of the sinks and turns on the faucet. He begins using his hands to slowly trickle water on her back. He knows a lot of women like backshot, and he aims to please. Her skin is blazing…he has never felt so much internal flame in a woman before. He begins to lick the quickly evaporating droplets from her skin. He is enjoys the looks of pure rapture on her face through the mirror. She turns her head to look over her shoulder, and he kisses her with wild abandon. She is amazed that with all her prior experience she has never been so turned on by another man before.*

Female voice: Hello? Hello? Is there anyone in there? Hello? Bang. Bang. Bang

To be continued…

I guess I will stop posting now. *Disclaimer* This story is purely fictional, and I am writing it as I go. If you guys don't like it let me know...if you want me to stop, let me know. All comments are welcome. This is my first attempt at writing, so bare with me.

IT'S WONDERFUL JAWI!!!!!!!!! Trust me I a big time romance reader have been for over 20 years...This ish is very good...yuh got me and the others hooked!!!! Can't wait for more posts...he 'rooks' parts are tastefully done and knowing the inner thoughts of the characters is very helpful...plus the mysterious side of what Delmar is really up to is nice likkle cliffhanger...don't give up his intentions too soon...i'm enjoying the guessing game I'm playing.

Blessings and git back to work writing...Gll

[jawi876 2]

Toya: I wonder what is taking that girl so long? There’s not a line waiting outside, so I know she is not waiting on a stall. I wonder if I should go get her? I’m sorry sir. I know that you and the other guests have been waiting for over 30 minutes now. I will run to get her, please don’t leave us.

*Toya dashes over to the closest restroom, and thinks she vaguely remembers seeing Mya walk this way. She is immediately puzzled and alarmed because a woman is standing outside the door, and she is frantic…nearing hysteria.*

Female voice: I have been waiting out here for over 10 minutes now. I can hear noises coming from in the restroom, but no one will answer. I heard running water as well. I have to get back in there because I dropped a family heirloom in one of the stalls. I can’t part from it, and my husband and children are waiting in the running taxi for me.

*Toya is halfheartedly listening to the woman, and one step away from heading to another restroom. She stops in her tracks because she hers a faint but familiar laugh. She listens closely to the door, and she hears definite whispering and movement. She and the lady begin to knock on the door and call out simultaneously.*

Female voice: Hello? Please open up the door. It will only take me a second. I promise. Please open up. This is a public restroom, and you do not have the right to commandeer it for your own personal use. I am going to report this right now. Hellllloooooo????!!!!

Toya: My? Are you in there? Mya honey, what’s wrong? Are you sick? Do you need some help? Can you hear me? Are you being held against your will? Hello?? Myyyyaaaa??? Sh**! What in the world is going on?

[Nicky Salmon 0]

Lawd! Mya yuh nasty!!! yuh ain't even been on di island 5 minutes!! **kissteet**

Hey it happens to the best of us. This is so good

[Sonshyne 2]

Mek mi get di papcawn an ting...hurry up noh man!

FI REAL..mi waan some popcawn tuh...nuh bodda fi hog it up Jonesie!...munch munch pass please.. this is good...

Bless,

Gill

This time I got enough for everyone

[Nicky Salmon 0]

I was beginning to think nobody was interested....

Girl this is better than Danielle Steele. I know romances keep going

[Sonshyne 2]

We gonna need some box drink

Edited October 23, 2007 by Sonshyne

[Nicky Salmon 0]

Delmar: Rassclaat!!! Mi cyan believe dis gyal give mi a bly so quick. Mi knoa mi lyrics sweet har. Mi have plans fey uh sweet likkle Mya. Mi nuh dun yuh yet mi gyal. Mi have fe breed yuh Mya babes. Gawd he-heellllp mi…mi ago breed har.

What does this mean in english i am trying and cant understand. This is so good. Keep writing