My name ain't Stella....

[Ta Ta 1]

My future is with you. If you don’t want to move here, I will come to the US with you. You do know that I can’t move around as free as you right? Mya I meant it when I asked you to marry me. There is no other woman for me.

And Mya's VisaJourney begins...

Bless Bless,

Gill

hahahahahaaaaaa on the visa journey. Go tell har habout VJ !

Jawi welcome back

[Mephys 2]

My future is with you. If you don’t want to move here, I will come to the US with you. You do know that I can’t move around as free as you right? Mya I meant it when I asked you to marry me. There is no other woman for me.

And Mya's VisaJourney begins...

Bless Bless,

Gill

Welcome Jawi I was checking this thread from time to time

[jawi876 2]

Oh I know! I was mocking those newbies that come on VJ and think they are the only ones filing for a loved one. They come up with some crazy reasons why they think their visa should be expedited...sometimes I just have to laugh

Sometimes Yardie, I feel the same way!! Like no no you go ahead Man,...I've only been sitting here waiting for my foo-foo NOA2 for DYAM NEAR FIVE MONTHS because I have nothing else to do & I enjoy having my man 3000 MILES AWAY!!! Oh, you're lonely?? Well absolutely that's reason enough fi cut deh line!! SURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPS!!!

Blessed,

Gill

awww puttus. At least you have an end in sight...something to countdown. *sigh*

I know Chica ...'memba wuh wi talk bout ...hold yuh faith and nuh figit bout deh power a prayer!! 'Dis too shall pass...ZEEN!!??

Love ya ,

Gill

I know...but it's still hard you know.

I'm finally figured how to read the story and weed out all the comments....Jawi you go girl, u sure u never wrote before...this stuff is good..I'm trying not to peek at what you wrote today..

How did you do it? I have never written a story before...dabbled in a little poetry...but nothing of this magnitude.

[jawi876 2]

Hi Omoba and Mephys! Missed you ladies! Glad you were still hanging around. Thanks again for the support.

[Jengles 0]

Oh I know! I was mocking those newbies that come on VJ and think they are the only ones filing for a loved one. They come up with some crazy reasons why they think their visa should be expedited...sometimes I just have to laugh

Sometimes Yardie, I feel the same way!! Like no no you go ahead Man,...I've only been sitting here waiting for my foo-foo NOA2 for DYAM NEAR FIVE MONTHS because I have nothing else to do & I enjoy having my man 3000 MILES AWAY!!! Oh, you're lonely?? Well absolutely that's reason enough fi cut deh line!! SURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRPS!!!

Blessed,

Gill

awww puttus. At least you have an end in sight...something to countdown. *sigh*

I know Chica ...'memba wuh wi talk bout ...hold yuh faith and nuh figit bout deh power a prayer!! 'Dis too shall pass...ZEEN!!??

Love ya ,

Gill

I know...but it's still hard you know.

I'm finally figured how to read the story and weed out all the comments....Jawi you go girl, u sure u never wrote before...this stuff is good..I'm trying not to peek at what you wrote today..

How did you do it? I have never written a story before...dabbled in a little poetry...but nothing of this magnitude.

I did a search on all your posts, I just have to remember to start reading from the bottom of the page up. I started reading the story before but kept getting distracted by all the side comments.

Glad to have u back!! now get back to writing.....please....

[jawi876 2]

Tradee: MYA!!! Turn de bumbocl**t wata off and open de door! Talk to me! Mya? Mya! Open the door before I take it down! MYA!!!!!

*Mya steps into the shower. Her entire body is trembling from anger. As the water cascades over her shoulders, she begins weeping softly. She stoops down in a corner of the shower, and hugs herself. Mya’s tears flow freely like the cool water from the shower head.

BAM! CRASH! CRACK!

Tradee crashes through the wooden door with brute force. He snatches the shower curtain back crudely. His intent to turn off the water stream was adverted by the sight of Mya crying in the corner. Her hair was soaked and hanging in wet ringlets all over her head, and her shoulders shuddered with the force of her sobs. Tradee steps into the shower, and attempts to gather her in his arms protectively. Mya begins to lash out with her tiny fists. She wants to strike him all over, to hurt him as much as he hurt her. However, her fists are no match to the sinewy and taut muscles that encompass his body.*

[jawi876 2]

Mya: *Shrieking through sobs* Let me go! Don’t touch me! Don’t TOUCH ME! I hate you! I hate you! I hate you! LET ME GO TRAVIS! I hate you!

Tradee: No. I love you Mya. I love you Mya. I love you Mya. I love you and my baby more than my own life. Please baby. It’s okay. Come on…stop crying Empress. I love you. I love you. I love you Empress. I love you so much Mya.

*Tradee allows Mya’s fist to pummel his wet t-shirt clad chest, as he gently strokes her hair, shoulders and back. He places a kiss on her temple, each of her eyelids, each track of her tears, her nose, her mouth, and her neck with each declaration of love.

Mya grows weary, and finally acquiesces to Tradee’s warm embrace. Her sobs and tears linger for a while. Then, her sobs stop under the pressure of Tradee’s soft kisses. However, her tears continue even while they share passionate, all-consuming kisses.

Tradee takes the available soap and begins lathering Mya’s body. He steps to one side to allow the water to rinse her off. Tradee lifts Mya’s body over his head and pins her against the shower walls as his hood comes to life again. He coaxes her legs onto his shoulders, and tentatively begins exploring the dip between her thighs with a shy tongue. Soon, Mya’s tears are replaced with moans of pleasure. She begins climbing the shower walls in a futile attempt to escape the rapturous gratification of Tradee’s mouth. Tradee can’t believe the intense reaction of her body, and he is amazed that her taste and scent was so delectable. Mya screams out loudly from an earth shattering climax, and her legs lock possessively around Tradee’s neck and shoulders. He gently pries her legs apart, and guides her body back down his. When Mya’s waist reaches his own, Tradee sinks into her with wild abandon and the pent-up excitement her recent climax created. He is mentally unable to hold off his own orgasm, and releases inside of her with the force of a rocket. The shower head continues to emit streams of now cold water over their tired forms. Tradee musters up the strength to carry Mya to his bed, where they both collapse with exhaustion.*

[Yaads 0]

Bwoy I tell yuh...once you taste the forbidden fruit you can never go back!

Jawi girl...you are killing me. I thought we would ease back into it but no...right back with the full fire

[Forever Young 1]

Bwoy I tell yuh...once you taste the forbidden fruit you can never go back!

Jawi girl...you are killing me. I thought we would ease back into it but no...right back with the full fire

TRUE TING DAT YARDIE!!!!

Bless, Gill

[jawi876 2]

*Ian and Melodee walk to Room 11 in relative silence. Melodee is still trying to come to terms with his abrupt mood swings, and Tran’s last call. Tran told her in so many words to be sure that Ian is who she wanted because he would not check for her again. Melodee knew that Ian could offer her an entirely different way of life. But, could she actually take her heart back from Tran? Ian had some endearing traits, but just as many if not more traits that would make her want to become a widow soon after they married.

Ian continued to steal glances at Melodee’s face. He wondered if the clouds in her eyes and the range of emotions crossing her angelic features would keep him from getting inside her thighs tonight.*

Ian: A dollar for your thoughts pretty one. I can’t express how much I regret my earlier outburst. I guess all the mishaps and pitfalls of my journey today came to a head. I am used to having multiple balls in the air at once, but they all decided to come down at the same time today. I’m sorry Melodee. I really am. I never meant to ruin our evening. You have to believe me.

Melodee: Whaa? Oh. I’m sorry, it’s nothing really. I’ll be fine. I apologize if I’m not quite the company you expected Ian. I would be lying if I told you that what I witnessed in the lobby didn’t disturb me. I mean, you went from 0 to 60 in under 30 seconds. I think you have a problem with displaced aggression because neither I nor the clerk deserved your wrath. You should consider talking to someone, perhaps your pastor.

Ian: I understand your concern Melodee. But, I assure you that I am fine, and I don’t think one blow up is just cause for me to seek counseling. Let’s just agree to put the entire unfortunate event behind us to salvage the rest of our evening. If you decide after tonight that you do not wish to see me again, I will begrudgingly admit defeat and disappear quietly from your life. *Ian uses his keycard to unlock the door. He opens the door, and stands aside for Melodee to enter first.* After you Jamaican Gem.

[jawi876 2]

Bwoy I tell yuh...once you taste the forbidden fruit you can never go back!

Jawi girl...you are killing me. I thought we would ease back into it but no...right back with the full fire

after 3 weeks away...I figured you all would fling rackstone afta mi if mi ease back into it...kikikiki

[jawi876 2]

*Melodee walks haltingly into the room, and turns to await Ian’s entry. After he closes the door behind them, she begins exploring the impeccable suite. Melodee spies a private Jacuzzi on the verandah, and turns it on. She takes a deep breath, and decides to forge ahead with her plan to seduce Ian the Stockbroka. Melodee reluctantly turns her cell phone off, and saunters back into the room with Ian.*

Melodee: Ian, can you order some room service? Champagne and fruit will do nicely. Can we get some music in here as well?

Ian: *Smiles and rubs his hands together with unrestrained glee. Ian picks up the phone and requests room service. He hangs up the phone and stands near the door watching Melodee.*My…my…my. I love a take charge woman! Your wish is indeed my command. You never cease to amaze me Gem. What else are you going to do to surprise me?

Melodee: *winks at Ian seductively* I’m sure I can find something else up my sleeve. Ian, before the mood is properly set, I need to talk to you for a minute.

Ian: Of course. What’s on your mind beautiful? *Ian walks over to Melodee to grab her in an excited and over eager embrace*

[jawi876 2]

Melodee: *expertly sidesteps Ian’s advances and wayward mouth* This. This is what we need to talk about baby. I am really enjoying spending time with you, and I hope you don’t take this the wrong way. But…umm…your kisses are a little too…how can I phrase this…a little too explosive.

Ian: *chuckling cockily* Daddy too much for you baby? Come over here, and let Daddy show you how to ride this ride. I promise to be gentle…at least at first.

Melodee: No…Ian…you don’t get it at all. Rest assured, I can handle the ride. I only know one way to be…and that’s frank and honest. Your kisses leave a lot to be desired. I mean you are a little to anxious and sloppy for my taste. I don’t need your lips all over my face…my nose…my chin. Are you willing to let me show you what I need and desire?

Ian: Damn. That’s kinda grimy Melodee. I have never had any complaints before, and there have been plenty before you. But, if you think you have what it takes to turn me out, I’ll let you take control for a minute shorty.

[classychic77 0]

Yay Jawi you are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We missed you.

[brownnskinn 0]

Jawi, GlAD YOUR FEELING BETTER!!!! :energetic: and just in time two more days of classes and I can concentrate on da story