Love story

[Jed aq 0]

Hi guys! new here. 

  I just wanna get some input how to write my fiance and I's love story. We've been dating for 11 years now and about 10 years of those is long distance relationship.  We are high school sweethearts. Shes my 1st girlfriend and I am her 1st boyfriend as well. I'm almost done with our story just finishing up on how we met for the last 2 years and its a bit long full of details about 2 pages. Any advice to make it shorter would be much  appreciated. Thanks!

[Ebunoluwa 6,136]

13 minutes ago, Jed aq said:

Hi guys! new here. 

  I just wanna get some input how to write my fiance and I's love story. We've been dating for 11 years now and about 10 years of those is long distance relationship.  We are high school sweethearts. Shes my 1st girlfriend and I am her 1st boyfriend as well. I'm almost done with our story just finishing up on how we met for the last 2 years and its a bit long full of details about 2 pages. Any advice to make it shorter would be much  appreciated. Thanks!

What country is she in ?

No long note necessary. The requirements are having met within the last 2 years from filing.
You can simply state :
My fiance and I met on____at____and our friendship developed into a love relationship_____.
I have spend time with her from___to____.
Submit evidence of meeting, passport stamps, receipts, photos etc and front load the petition if she is from a high fraud country or

if you have red flags, if she is from an easy country then you don't have to worry about front loading and she can bring more evidence

for the interview at the embassy. Immigration officers are under enormous workloads and don't have time reading your 2 page letter.
However the CO at the embassy may like reading it as it will go there with your file and may make his/her decision easier.
I would title the letter Relationship Timeline and be precise and to the point.
Only you will know what details to include and which to leave out because nobody else is living your unique story.
Focus more on good quality evidence and real face time visits.

[Jed aq 0]

4 minutes ago, Ebunoluwa said:

What country is she in ?

No long note necessary. The requirements are having met within the last 2 years from filing.
You can simply state :
My fiance and I met on____at____and our friendship developed into a love relationship_____.
I have spend time with her from___to____.
Submit evidence of meeting, passport stamps, receipts, photos etc and front load the petition if she is from a high fraud country or

if you have red flags, if she is from an easy country then you don't have to worry about front loading and she can bring more evidence

for the interview at the embassy. Immigration officers are under enormous workloads and don't have time reading your 2 page letter.
However the CO at the embassy may like reading it as it will go there with your file and may make his/her decision easier.
I would title the letter Relationship Timeline and be precise and to the point.
Only you will know what details to include and which to leave out because nobody else is living your unique story.
Focus more on good quality evidence and real face time visits.

Thanks! That will help a lot. 

She's from philippines. We're both filipinos but I moved to US in 2007.

what do you mean by front load the petition?

[Ebunoluwa 6,136]

Please do a quick search , if you still have questions post again here. There are many threads on it explaining it.