how much is too much for a letter of intent (2nd one pre-interview)?

[ricewanted 3]

Hello there, I have this question but I'm too fraid to ask the Consulate directly by email so I bring it up here to VJ:

Here's my (petitioner) 2nd letter of intent for my fiancee to bring it with her to interview. From the content of the letter you could have guessed my story. In case it's confusing, I can lay it out like this:

in 2013, mom & I flew to VN for a planned engagement, but mom said she believe her health won't allow another trip to VN and she (I'm sorry for her, such a long flight ). And with new food/fruits allergies began to develop, mom demanded us to get marry quick so she could go back to US. So things cut short & quick, we re-arranged our engagement ceremony & turned it into wedding ceremony with engagement traditions within it. A week later post-ceremony, we go back to Hochiminh to register marriage but applicant weren't accepted by Vietnamese gov't due to missing documents. Returned to US, with unimproved condition of mom, I went ahead file I-129F. Then in October 2013, mom was doing great, better. So I went to Vietnam to again with intention to get our marriage registration at So Tu Phap, stopped by Consulate and they said "don't" & "wait for K-1 completion", otherwise it will be a messy process.

Sorry there, so here is the letter of intent, and any feedback/suggestion whether turning this letter would be helpful or useless for the K-1 interview. Thanks ahead.

I ricewanted legal age, and presently residing at XXXXXXXX. U.S.A., am submitting this Statement as follows:

I met my fiancee KTL through the online & chat in late 2010/early 2011. We communicated with each other and I decided to meet her in Vietnam in 2012 and had met her whole family circle. We had a wonderful time together and I am so happy that I have found her. We loved each other so much and we are looking forward to be together forever. Between late 2012 & early 2013, we had some challenging moments of carry out our plan to get wedded in Vietnam per cultural standpoint of both of us and our families. Fortunately, my mother’s health was improved & she was able to travel to Vietnam in April 2013 for our planned engagement within a wedding ceremony. So Tu Phap at District 1 staff stated they unable to accept our application for marriage registration as I did not have my divorce decree with me during at that time regardless I have shown them the sworn single affidavit by the Consulate (I was able to obtain the divorce decree upon return to US). Back in USA, I submitted I-129F & applied K-1 visa for my fiancee so we could get married and be together forever.

I hereby certify that I am legally free to marry and have a pure and sincere intention to marry miss KT, a Vietnamese citizen, with in ninety {90) days of her admission into the United States.

Edited February 12, 2014 by ricewanted

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Writing anything more than what's included in the example right here on visajourney is too much. It's just a letter of intent, and nothing more. All you need state that you intend to marry within 90-days after arrival to the US. Saying anything more is not only not needed, it may even introduce problems.

http://www.visajourney.com/examples/Fiance_Letter_of_Intent.doc

[baron555 934]

Follow the Example Forms. They are short and sweet and do the trick. You don't get extra credit for extra words.

[Pitaya 2,577]

Follow the Example Forms. They are short and sweet and do the trick. You don't get extra credit for extra words.

[Zedayn 485]

All you need is a simple statement re-affirming your intent to marry. You do not need to add extra fluff to the statement, like your relationship history. All that is needed is a single statement that you agree to marry your fiancée.

This is all you need:

I, (YOUR NAME), re-affirm that I am legally able and willing to marry (FIANCEE'S NAME) within 90 days of her arrival to the United States.

[ricewanted 3]

All you need is a simple statement re-affirming your intent to marry. You do not need to add extra fluff to the statement, like your relationship history. All that is needed is a single statement that you agree to marry your fiancée.

This is all you need:

I, (YOUR NAME), re-affirm that I am legally able and willing to marry (FIANCEE'S NAME) within 90 days of her arrival to the United States.

Thanks all. I understood. I thought be honest would be better due to the nature of my works.

All your comments appreciated. Best regards.