Z.y.z.z

[Tough_Era 71]

Yesssss! I love it so much! haha!

Nice!

thanks JULIANNA.

[Ban Hammer 13,573]

Hi everybody! You can Write poems about everything that brought you here to this amazing website

i'd like to remind everyone that this thread is about poems, as stated by the op above. let's stay on topic.

[sandinista! 1,816]

I'd like to file a formal request with moderation that all mod input and admonishment at least be in haiku form on this thread then.

[Nasturtium 500]

I'd like to file a formal request with moderation that all mod input and admonishment at least be in haiku form on this thread then.

I agree with this

All mods should embrace haiku

Comply with OP.

[hamigirl710 112]

I found in a man

things I never knew of ME

Shared love of the ocean

the smell of the sea

He cared for my soul

then came the rest

Not seeing my face

I made it a test

We talked day and night

not knowing each other

Starting as friends

No thoughts of a lover

Our friendship showed me

many things of my worth

I learned of Islam

and my heart had rebirth

Having asked GOD for help

a time before

He brought us together

only NOW, I know what for

I have peace in my heart

and beauty from within

being loved by my man

shows assurance through my skin

The beauty outside

for sure will fade

No other can effect

the one inside...GOD made

WOW!! I love it!!! <3

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

omg looooooooooool

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

To the two muses, WOM and Mithra

My treacherous lover

You shattered my heart

And for years made me wait for the day that we would be as one

I carried our dream inside of me only to lose him, as I floated into the abyss of grief

Burdened by love for you and the knowledge that if I loved you, I would remain beside you

You burdened me, you shamed me, my treacherous lover

Unfaithful not just in body but in soul as well

You scanned my very being looking for just about anything

Anything left you could take away from me

You took my birthright, my homeland and made me feel as if I stood naked in a field of lost dreams

But I knew what I must do towards the end

I would hand you what you wanted and then I would be released

Released from the grief of losing not one but two

And still you cannot see the depths of how much I loved you

How much I did without not only waiting for you but after you arrived

So now we listen to the sounds of Mimouna

Of ethereal violins that forever play

You might feel released of the responsibility to be kind to me

And yet some how I tower, I am the tower of Mansour

I am the kouba in the villiage

I became epic in my pain and I never lost sight

Of the shores of Normandy where my father bled at 19

Or my mothers innocence as she married my father

When Patsy Cline sang on am radios

I am in the wind when you walk and I am in the coffee you drink

I gave 6 years of my life for you and I know who I was

And somehow I know who I became

In some ways ,more American than I ever dreamed to be

I laid down my life for another, so that they might have what I was born with

And as I walk through the gardens of stone

And look out my car window at stone after stone

And flowers that just might never bloom again

I know who I was to you and who I now am to me

Forever together in one way or another

But no longer bitter

My treacherous , treacherous North African lover

Edited May 31, 2012 by Beauty for Ashes

[morocco4ever 63]

There once was a man from Nantucket.

No, wait, that wasn't it.

There once was a man called big Z's

Women see him and fall to their knees

His arrogant words gathered angry women in herds

And now his string is obscure.

A new fight can start at this time

just make sure to keep it in rhyme

See how accommodating MENA women can be?

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

There once was a man from Nantucket.

No, wait, that wasn't it.

There once was a man called big Z's

Women see him and fall to their knees

His arrogant words gathered angry women in herds

And now his string is obscure.

A new fight can start at this time

just make sure to keep it in rhyme

See how accommodating MENA women can be?

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[~PalmTreeGurl~ 154]

Night & Day

Day & Night

I was chatting online & found Mr Right

It was love at first smile

I hadn't had that in awhile

With his emoticons & I love you's

I couldn't stand not to do it too

So we planned on a date

to see each other would be great

I hopped on a plane

While peeps thought I was insane

For a love that was sure

And would forever endure

We became man & wife

Oh what a life

Only to come home

and be all alone

To wait for some time

I nearly lost my mind

It was all worth it in the end

to marry my best friend !

Not the best poem but I tried

Edited May 31, 2012 by ~PalmTreeGurl~

[nicky&imad 16]

I found in a man

things I never knew of ME

Shared love of the ocean

the smell of the sea

He cared for my soul

then came the rest

Not seeing my face

I made it a test

We talked day and night

not knowing each other

Starting as friends

No thoughts of a lover

Our friendship showed me

many things of my worth

I learned of Islam

and my heart had rebirth

Having asked GOD for help

a time before

He brought us together

only NOW, I know what for

I have peace in my heart

and beauty from within

being loved by my man

shows assurance through my skin

The beauty outside

for sure will fade

No other can effect

the one inside...GOD made

FANTATIC!!!!!!! I love it you are so talented, really :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs:

Night & Day

Day & Night

I was chatting online & found Mr Right

It was love at first smile

I hadn't had that in awhile

With his emoticons & I love you's

I couldn't stand not to do it too

So we planned on a date

to see each other would be great

I hopped on a plane

While peeps thought I was insane

For a love that was sure

And would forever endure

We became man & wife

Oh what a life

Only to come home

and be all alone

To wait for some time

I nearly lost my mind

It was all worth it in the end

to marry my best friend !

Not the best poem but I tried

really?? I thought it was great , sounded good to me , any body else agree??? :dance:

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

There once was a man from Nantucket.

No, wait, that wasn't it.

There once was a man called big Z's

Women see him and fall to their knees

His arrogant words gathered angry women in herds

And now his string is obscure.

A new fight can start at this time

just make sure to keep it in rhyme

See how accommodating MENA women can be?

If I am accomodating, its because I am required to be ..sigh

FANTATIC!!!!!!! I love it you are so talented, really :thumbs: :thumbs: :thumbs:

really?? I thought it was great , sounded good to me , any body else agree??? :dance:

yes.. it was really good

Edited May 31, 2012 by Beauty for Ashes

[Mithra 1,185]

Kat, that was beautiful!

M4E - funny! Lol!

Tamara - not bad!

Love the haikus!

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

Kat, that was beautiful!

M4E - funny! Lol!

Tamara - not bad!

Love the haikus!

the only word I could use to describe him is treacherous..I just cannot find a better word than that

by the way, he called me today to ask me to find his aunt a nebulizer..It never ends..LOL...sylvia plath to his ted hughes

Edited May 31, 2012 by Beauty for Ashes

[Mithra 1,185]

he's got cojones that's for sure.