Z.y.z.z

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

Howling at the moon

or barking up the wrong tree

lulz @ TMI

I thought it was the poetry thread?

Its become the HAIKU thread.

Personally I like rai poetry

Why does she go out all hours of the night and act like a floozy.. she lies all the time

The song is LIAH by CHEB KHALED

Liah means why in western algerian dialect.. He is acting her why she lies all the time

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

I thought it was the poetry thread?

Its become the HAIKU thread.

Personally I like rai poetry

Why does she go out all hours of the night and act like a floozy.. she lies all the time

The song is LIAH by CHEB KHALED

Liah means why in western algerian dialect.. He is acting her why she lies all the time

Hey chebba benti bladi

Hey beautiful girl from my country, I will always love you best

Your eyes...Hey beautiful girl from my country,, you are the girl from my country, I like the women from my country best of all, they have my heart

[PalestineMyHeart 1,897]

Haiku is a form of poetry.

Maybe we could shift to sonnet or something to make it more challenging

[Nasturtium 500]

Haiku is a form of poetry.

Maybe we could shift to sonnet or something to make it more challenging

I wrote a sonnet first!

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

I wrote a sonnet first!

Please go back to sonnets. I am a confessional poet....

I made a choice to throw my love upon the ground

To be mulled over and picked through

To take what they wanted and leave the rest of me behind

Not much was left of me towards the end

That he could find any use for

My pockets picked

My hands were left

With nothing but jars of sand and water

Memories of fleeting smiles and fraudulent celebrations

Where the matron of honor

was lunch for all

[Beauty for Ashes 257]

I wrote a sonnet first!

I absolutley aware of what haiku is.

5 7 5 5 7 5

I don't particularly enjoy it past 20 haiku poems

ALTHOUGH

It can be used to crucify and tease and prod and none is the wiser..LOL

secret jabs I see

refrences unknown

my mind is churning

[PalestineMyHeart 1,897]

I absolutley aware of what haiku is.

5 7 5 5 7 5

I don't particularly enjoy it past 20 haiku poems

ALTHOUGH

It can be used to crucify and tease and prod and none is the wiser..LOL

secret jabs I see

refrences unknown

my mind is churning

Well... so could a sonnet or a limerick or anything really.

There were some really good haikus in here. But I am up for whatever the poets wish to create

I wrote a sonnet first!

Please to repost as I missed it

[Nasturtium 500]

Well... so could a sonnet or a limerick or anything really.

There were some really good haikus in here. But I am up for whatever the poets wish to create

Please to repost as I missed it

Haikus are my favorite. I like them better than any other form of poetry!

http://www.visajourney.com/forums/topic/370395-zyzz/page__view__findpost__p__5408034

^^^ sonnet!

Edited June 2, 2012 by julianna

[PalestineMyHeart 1,897]

Haikus are my favorite. I like them better than any other form of poetry!

http://www.visajourney.com/forums/topic/370395-zyzz/page__view__findpost__p__5408034

^^^ sonnet!

Awesome !

[Nasturtium 500]

Awesome !

Yes!

[Shoot Em Straight 385]

When my day is hard

your'e the medicine I take

For us were are one

With you I can fly

Just knowing I am loved

I can do ANYTHING

No stranger knows when

I walk with a smile

My thoughts are on us

of our talks today

laugh out at night

when I think of your joke

Here is to our US

for the days ahead

I love the man

that u are

The dreams keep me strong

of couple we could be

You are my medicine

I thank God for this

[Tough_Era 71]

When my day is hard

your'e the medicine I take

For us were are one

With you I can fly

Just knowing I am loved

I can do ANYTHING

No stranger knows when

I walk with a smile

My thoughts are on us

of our talks today

laugh out at night

when I think of your joke

Here is to our US

for the days ahead

I love the man

that u are

The dreams keep me strong

of couple we could be

You are my medicine

I thank God for this

I'm sure the medicine you take is very strong hahaha... i like it

[Linds&Youssef 56]

First, I have to say, Beauty for Ashes, I almost fell out of my seat laughing at your video link on how to get white girls... thanks for making my day! Zagray, the comments about the use of the word "envious" may or may not be solely based upon your usage. I have to say that I agree--there seems to be a different view of envy in the Moroccan culture than there is in the US culture. I've even heard my own fiance talk about other people being envious or even the potential for them to be envious give certain circumstances... circumstances which would not necessarily be grounds for envy here in the US. It's not my intention to generalize, but I've noticed that things that I as an American have no problem sharing (ideas, happy outcomes, fortunate occurrences, etc.), my fiance would never share because he'd be concerned that it might create envy and/or ill-will toward his good fortune. It's not an all-the-time thing, necessarily... but it's certainly a different perspective that really does exist. Just sayin'

Edited June 4, 2012 by Linds&Youssef

[Tough_Era 71]

First, I have to say, Beauty for Ashes, I almost fell out of my seat laughing at your video link... thanks for making my day! Zagray, the comments about the use of the word "envious" may or may not be solely based upon your usage. I have to say that I agree--there seems to be a different view of envy in the Moroccan culture than there is in the US culture. I've even heard my own fiance talk about other people being envious or even the potential for them to be envious give certain circumstances... circumstances which would not necessarily be grounds for envy here in the US. It's not my intention to generalize, but I've noticed that things that I as an American have no problem sharing (ideas, happy outcomes, fortunate occurrences, etc.), my fiance would never share because he'd be concerned that it might create envy and/or ill-will toward his good fortune. It's not an all-the-time thing, necessarily... but it's certainly a different perspective that really does exist. Just sayin'

Well, the culture is different from country to another you know that... But we don't know who's right

[Linds&Youssef 56]

It's not about being right. It's just different. What's right for you may or may not be right for my fiance who's also Moroccan. Just as what's right for me may not be what's right for someone else who's American. And certainly there's a difference in what's right for someone from the Moroccan culture versus the American culture because it's all about your own perspective, your culture, and so many other factors. I'm not saying it's a bad thing for there to be a difference in how the use of a single word works. It's not good or bad. It's just different.