Subject of a complement to the subject this is my resume

[emad desouky 1]

hi vj

I have already put my resume in brief and benefited greatly from all the comments now, I put in another resume and I hope that everyone put their opinion about it and if it need any change

Name:

Date of Birth:

address:

Phone:

Cell:

Email:

Education or Qualification

High school

Technical school 5 years diploma system

Specialization/ mechanical engineering Years of graduation/ 1998

Work Experience:

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

In the profession of technical production

In the period from 01/6/2002 to 03/31/2012

Job Description: The factory system based on the work of each section in sequence from the previous section takes a

We are the first section we convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures

With the re-run the product defective rates of the other sections with mixtures of re-use them again

Section called the mixer

Reason for leaving work to leave the country

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 05/01/2001 to 01/05/2002

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

Reason for leaving work to work in Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

• German construction company Petroleum DSD Ferrometalco in Alexandria

Company for expansion tanks and natural gas (MIDOR)

In the profession of mechanical

In the period from 09/7/2000 TO 04/28/2001

Job Description: Make sure the work of all pumps and turbines and carry out maintenance work crisis

Reason for Leave work the completion of the project

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 09/20/1999 to 09/05/2000

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

• Japanese company Kajima Corporation co in the expansion of the Alexandria National Iron and Steel

In the profession of surveyor roads

In the period from 01/10/1998 to 09/15/1999

Job Description Workers, floor area, and calculate the areas and quantities, and the work of kinds of maps, and the use of computers "computer" in the account spatial, and calculate the surfaces, and to change the borders, and demarcation of property, real estate, the location of water and sewage networks, lines and locations of electrical networks. It also defines the main roads and the work of sectors longitudinal and cross it, and calculates the cubes cut and fill and location of bridges

Reason for Leave work for the completion of the project

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 09/21/1997 to 01/08/1998

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reasons for Leave work go to Japanese company Kajima Corporation co

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1997 to 08/21/1997

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1999 to 09/21/1996

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1995 to 09/21/1995

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1994 to 09/21/1994

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1993 to 09/21/1993

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

Training Courses

• ICDL computer software in 2007

Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications

• Fire-resistant:

Training of the Egyptian government to resist fire 2006

The selection of • Alexandria tire company (Pirelli) for training on how to resist fire as one of the abundant Organization Occupational Safety and Health

Skill

Computer

• Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications both in English and Arabic.

Language

• Arabic Excellent writing and speaking

• .English. good writing and speaking

• Russian good in speaking

• Forklift Excellent driving

•

Honors and awards

Best performance for year 2010 in Alexandria tire. Co (Pirelli)

Were selected based on the following that

1-First, the standard of efficiency, taken from the annual report, more than 95%

On the nomination of the department and remains exclusively managing director for the following reasons

2- regular work and absenteeism throughout the year

3- competence in solving problems facing technically at work

3- innovation and the addition of proposals for the development of the work performed

4-Working under pressure and speed make the right decision

5 - follow the instructions of Occupational Safety and Health

6 - speed training and other training on the new machines added to work

7-Good behavior in dealing with superiors and colleagues at work

8-The number of operating locations and to respond to work in more than one place

9 - interest in working with tools and maintain the machine and clean work environment

10 - not to create problems within the scope of work

11 -discovery of dangerous places, report and make proposals to avoid these problems

12-Belonging to a place of work is evident from the response to work on rest days and holidays, if so requested by the worker

The Goals

The desire to reach the top and career development of practical and scientific

i hope all answer me and thanks for all

[shenaaz 5]

I would get someone that is very good in English to go over or redo your resume since there are some grammatical mistakes.Hope this helps somewhat and all the best in job hunting field.

[NY_BX 397]

hi vj

I have already put my resume in brief and benefited greatly from all the comments now, I put in another resume and I hope that everyone put their opinion about it and if it need any change

Name:

Date of Birth: Illegal. It opens the door for age discrimination.

address:

Phone:

Cell:

Email:

Education or Qualification

High school

Technical school 5 years diploma system

Specialization/ mechanical engineering Years of graduation/ 1998

Work Experience:

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

In the profession of technical production

In the period from 01/6/2002 to 03/31/2012

Job Description: The factory system based on the work of each section in sequence from the previous section takes a

We are the first section we convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures

With the re-run the product defective rates of the other sections with mixtures of re-use them again

Section called the mixer

Reason for leaving work to leave the country

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 05/01/2001 to 01/05/2002

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

Reason for leaving work to work in Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

• German construction company Petroleum DSD Ferrometalco in Alexandria

Company for expansion tanks and natural gas (MIDOR)

In the profession of mechanical

In the period from 09/7/2000 TO 04/28/2001

Job Description: Make sure the work of all pumps and turbines and carry out maintenance work crisis

Reason for Leave work the completion of the project

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 09/20/1999 to 09/05/2000

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

• Japanese company Kajima Corporation co in the expansion of the Alexandria National Iron and Steel

In the profession of surveyor roads

In the period from 01/10/1998 to 09/15/1999

Job Description Workers, floor area, and calculate the areas and quantities, and the work of kinds of maps, and the use of computers "computer" in the account spatial, and calculate the surfaces, and to change the borders, and demarcation of property, real estate, the location of water and sewage networks, lines and locations of electrical networks. It also defines the main roads and the work of sectors longitudinal and cross it, and calculates the cubes cut and fill and location of bridges

Reason for Leave work for the completion of the project

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 09/21/1997 to 01/08/1998

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reasons for Leave work go to Japanese company Kajima Corporation co

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1997 to 08/21/1997

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1999 to 09/21/1996

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1995 to 09/21/1995

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1994 to 09/21/1994

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1993 to 09/21/1993

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reason for leaving work to return to school Consolidate these in one bullet point: Paris Shoes 05/1993-01/1998 followed by your duties.

Training Courses

• ICDL computer software in 2007

Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications

• Fire-resistant:

Training of the Egyptian government to resist fire 2006

The selection of • Alexandria tire company (Pirelli) for training on how to resist fire as one of the abundant Organization Occupational Safety and Health

Skill

Computer

• Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications both in English and Arabic.

Language

• Arabic Excellent writing and speaking Fully bilingual (Arabic and English)

• .English. good writing and speaking

• Russian good in speaking Conversational Russian.

• Forklift Excellent driving

•

Honors and awards

Best performance for year 2010 in Alexandria tire. Co (Pirelli)

Were selected based on the following that

1-First, the standard of efficiency, taken from the annual report, more than 95%

On the nomination of the department and remains exclusively managing director for the following reasons

2- regular work and absenteeism throughout the year

3- competence in solving problems facing technically at work

3- innovation and the addition of proposals for the development of the work performed

4-Working under pressure and speed make the right decision

5 - follow the instructions of Occupational Safety and Health

6 - speed training and other training on the new machines added to work

7-Good behavior in dealing with superiors and colleagues at work

8-The number of operating locations and to respond to work in more than one place

9 - interest in working with tools and maintain the machine and clean work environment

10 - not to create problems within the scope of work

11 -discovery of dangerous places, report and make proposals to avoid these problems

12-Belonging to a place of work is evident from the response to work on rest days and holidays, if so requested by the worker

The Goals

The desire to reach the top and career development of practical and scientific You will talk about your objectives in your cover letter.

i hope all answer me and thanks for all

I highly suggest you hire resume services; an expert that can condense and re-write this for you. It's not a bad start, but it needs work.

If you can't, google some resume examples and mimic them.

Good luck

[NY_BX 397]

I would get someone that is very good in English to go over or redo your resume since there are some grammatical mistakes.Hope this helps somewhat and all the best in job hunting field.

...and formatting mistakes. The issue is adding stuff (i.e. date of birth) that will automatically disqualify the OP. Some softwares will delete resumes with any wording that doesn't comply with EEOC regulations. It is important to know what the EEOC regulations are prior to sending a resume out.

[xtianj 10]

Maybe your wife can help you edit your resume. :-)

[together4evr 360]

This is much better. Keep trying and try to use something like this

Emad Desouky

5555 egyptian way

St Clair, Mo 99999

(999)999-9999

email@email.com

Goal: To obtain a position that creates challenges and provides opportunities for advancement.

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

TECHNICAL PRODUCTION 1/6/2002-3/31/2012

Job Description: convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures.

• Sandra shoes

MANAGER 5/1/2001-1/5/2002

Job Description: To choose the models and providing customer service in all aspects of the business, Responsible for the accounts of business and budget of the facility

• Petroleum DSD Ferrometalco in Alexandria

Company for expansion tanks and natural gas (MIDOR)

MECHANICAL??? WHAT 9/2000-4/2001

Job Description: Manage the efficiency and accuracy of all pumps and turbines and carry out maintenance in work crisis

[emad desouky 1]

thank you for every body i made some change of it and i put it now with my cover letter to see how it is

Name:

Address

Phone:

Cell:

Email:

Education or Qualification

High school

Technical school 5 years diploma system

Specialization/ mechanical engineering Years of graduation/ 1998

Work Experience:

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

In the profession of technical production

In the period from 01/6/2002 to 03/31/2012

Job Description: The factory system based on the work of each section in sequence from the previous section takes a

We are the first section we convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures

With the re-run the product defective rates of the other sections with mixtures of re-use them again

Section called the mixer

Reason for leaving work to leave the country

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 05/01/2001 to 01/05/2002

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

Reason for leaving work to work in Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

• German construction company Petroleum DSD Ferrometalco in Alexandria

Company for expansion tanks and natural gas (MIDOR)

In the profession of mechanical

In the period from 09/7/2000 TO 04/28/2001

Job Description: Make sure the work of all pumps and turbines and carry out maintenance work crisis

Reason for Leave work the completion of the project

• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

In the period from 09/20/1999 to 09/05/2000

Job Description: To choose the models and dealing with customers the best picture of dealing with companies, factories, and hold them accountable financially and do the accounts of the shop

• Japanese company Kajima Corporation co in the expansion of the Alexandria National Iron and Steel

In the profession of surveyor roads

In the period from 01/10/1998 to 09/15/1999

Job Description Workers, floor area, and calculate the areas and quantities, and the work of kinds of maps, and the use of computers "computer" in the account spatial, and calculate the surfaces, and to change the borders, and demarcation of property, real estate, the location of water and sewage networks, lines and locations of electrical networks. It also defines the main roads and the work of sectors longitudinal and cross it, and calculates the cubes cut and fill and location of bridges

Reason for Leave work for the completion of the project

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 09/21/1997 to 01/08/1998 and from 05/21/1997 to 08/21/1997 and from 05/21/1999 to 09/21/1996 and from 05/21/1995 to 09/21/1995

And from 05/21/1994 to 09/21/1994 and from 05/21/1993 to 09/21/1993

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reasons for Leave work go to Japanese company Kajima Corporation co

• Paris shoes

In the profession of Shoe salesman

In the period from 05/21/1997 to 08/21/1997 and from 05/21/1996 to 09/21/1996 and from 05/21/1995 to 09/21/1995

And from 05/21/1994 to 09/21/1994 and from 05/21/1993 to 09/21/1993

Job Description: Sale shoes and selection models and dealing with the factories and show concern for the shop in the best form of dealing with customers

Reasons for Leave work go back to school

Training Courses

• ICDL computer software in 2007

Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications

• Fire-resistant:

Training of the Egyptian government to resist fire 2006

The selection of • Alexandria tire company (Pirelli) for training on how to resist fire as one of the abundant Organization Occupational Safety and Health

Skill

Computer

• Microsoft software, Word, PowerPoint, Excel, and other applications both in English and Arabic.

Language

• Arabic Excellent writing and speaking

• .English. good writing and speaking

• Conversational Russian.

• Driving Forklift Excellent

Honors and awards

Best performance for year 2010 in Alexandria tire. Co (Pirelli)

Were selected based on the following that

1-First, the standard of efficiency, taken from the annual report, more than 95%

On the nomination of the department and remains exclusively managing director for the following reasons

2- regular work and absenteeism throughout the year

3- competence in solving problems facing technically at work

3- innovation and the addition of proposals for the development of the work performed

4-Working under pressure and speed make the right decision

5 - follow the instructions of Occupational Safety and Health

6 - speed training and other training on the new machines added to work

7-Good behavior in dealing with superiors and colleagues at work

8-The number of operating locations and to respond to work in more than one place

9 - Interest in working with tools and maintain the machine and clean work environment

and this is my cover letter

Name:

Address:

Phone:

Email:

Dear/

Please accept my resume for the research technician job, or any other position that would be suitable for me. I am confident that my background and skills in research techniques will prove to be an effective match for your qualifications.

I have experience in the field of manufacturing for many years. I take all the tasks related to manufacturing. I am able to work with other people in a team and personal work. I am able to work under pressure and be a challenge to me.

I am reliable and organized, and enthusiastic to learn. I am sure that I will carry over the same enthusiasm and skill in doing work .I do not to create problems within the work place. I always belonging to a place of work and I can to work on rest days and holidays, if so requested

Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

The Goals

The desire to reach the top and career development of practical and scientific

This is much better. Keep trying and try to use something like this

Emad Desouky

5555 egyptian way

St Clair, Mo 99999

(999)999-9999

email@email.com

Goal: To obtain a position that creates challenges and provides opportunities for advancement.

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

TECHNICAL PRODUCTION 1/6/2002-3/31/2012

Job Description: convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures.

• Sandra shoes

MANAGER 5/1/2001-1/5/2002

Job Description: To choose the models and providing customer service in all aspects of the business, Responsible for the accounts of business and budget of the facility

• Petroleum DSD Ferrometalco in Alexandria

Company for expansion tanks and natural gas (MIDOR)

MECHANICAL??? WHAT 9/2000-4/2001

Job Description: Manage the efficiency and accuracy of all pumps and turbines and carry out maintenance in work crisis

thank you for your help and wish you have great life

Edited May 30, 2012 by emad desouky

[LeftCoastLady 441]

Emad,

Your resume still needs a lot of work. I've attached resume and cover letter templates. Please make your information fit to what I've laid out. This is what most employers are expecting when they go through a stack of resumes. Most spend mere seconds skimming your information before moving on to the next applicant, so it has to be easy to read/comprehend while spelling out why you're qualified for the opening they're seeking to fill.

Once you've updated your versions of the docs, I would highly recommend taking them to an employment agency so they can further refine it based on your skill set. They can also proofread it for grammar, incorrect word usage, etc. Simply google "employment agency in [your city]" to locate one in your area.

Good luck!

coverletter_template.doc

resume_template.doc

Edited May 30, 2012 by LeftCoastLady

[emad desouky 1]

Emad,

Your resume still needs a lot of work. I've attached resume and cover letter templates. Please make your information fit to what I've laid out. This is what most employers are expecting when they go through a stack of resumes. Most spend mere seconds skimming your information before moving on to the next applicant, so it has to be easy to read/comprehend while spelling out why you're qualified for the opening they're seeking to fill.

Once you've updated your versions of the docs, I would highly recommend taking them to an employment agency so they can further refine it based on your skill set. They can also proofread it for grammar, incorrect word usage, etc. Simply google "employment agency in [your city]" to locate one in your area.

Good luck!

thank you so much

[anita_t 4]

thank you for every body i made some change of it and i put it now with my cover letter to see how it is

Name:

Address

Phone:

Cell:

Email:

Education or Qualification

High school

Technical school 5 years diploma system

Specialization/ mechanical engineering Years of graduation/ 1998

Work Experience:

• Alexandria tire company (Pirelli)

In the profession of technical production YOU NEED A JOB TITLE HERE SUCH AS INDUSTRIAL ENGINEER OR TECHNICIAN. JUDGED ON WHAT YOU WROTE I CAN'T EVEN FIGURE OUT WETHER THIS IS AN ENGINEERING OR A TECHNICAL POSITION. In the period from 01/6/2002 to 03/31/2012

Job Description: The factory system based on the work of each section in sequence from the previous section takes a

We are the first section we convert the raw material, a rubber, carbon, oils and chemicals to the rubber in the form of pages by mixing raw materials determine the weights a certain weight according to her whereabouts framework and then we are mixing in a large mixer and continue mixing and isolate defective mixtures

With the re-run the product defective rates of the other sections with mixtures of re-use them again

Section called the mixer DESCRIBE HERE WHAT YOU DID NOT WHAT THE FACTORY DOES. HERE IS A STANDARD JOB DESCRIPTION FOR AN INDUSTRIAL ENGINEER, SO YOU CAN GET A FEEL FOR HOW IT SHOULD LOOK LIKE: 1) Plans utilization of facilities, equipment, materials, and personnel to improve efficiency of operations: Studies functional statements, organization charts, and project information to determine functions and responsibilities of workers and work units and to identify areas of duplication.

2) Establishes work measurement programs and analyzes work samples to develop standards for labor utilization.

3) Analyzes work force utilization, facility layout, and operational data, such as production costs, process flow charts, and production schedules, to determine efficient utilization of workers and equipment.

4) Recommends methods for improving worker efficiency and reducing waste of materials and utilities, such as restructuring job duties, reorganizing work flow, relocating work stations and equipment, and purchase of equipment.

5) Confers with management and engineering staff to implement plans and recommendations.

6) May develop management systems for cost analysis, financial planning, wage and salary administration, and job evaluation

Reason for leaving work to leave the country• Sandra shoes

In the profession of manager

Your resume is too long you need to customize it for the job you are applying for. For technical positions barely mention selling shoes, while for customer service or similar jobs use them. I had to sets of resumes. One listing only some odd jobs -for ebtry-level get out of house jobs-and one with relevant experiences for an engineering position. You need prodessional help with this resume.

[Harpa Timsah 13,258]

I just wanted to jump in and say, although it still needs a lot of work (and the above advice is excellent) it is much better than before. Consider it a second rough draft, and keep at it.

In my resume, I have name and address like a letterhead across the top in a different (though still conservative) font. Then I use that on my cover letter too, like a letterhead paper would be.

Emad Desouky

5555 Egyptian Way St Clair, MO 99999

(999)999-9999 email@email.com

[kptaylor 5]

Also consider dropping some of the jobs you list in your work history. As a manager who has done hiring recently, too many jobs with less than one year's duration will make me question whether you will remain with my firm for very long. If you have explanations as to why so much job movement happened, then that may be okay.

[rade2rising 205]

the resume is way too long

they just glance at your resume for few seconds

just put the important info

your job history is way too long to read

be concise

[emad desouky 1]

thanks for all people respond me