I've created a monster!!!!!

[Yaads 0]

I finally made it through all 15 some pages I needed to catch up on and I am speechless I am not preggers but I too was bawling my eyes out (very discreetly here at work).

Jawi you are such a fantastic writer and couldn't believe how caught up I was in all the twists and turns...very well done girl...fantastic! Many kudos and blessing to you

[Sonshyne 2]

Wha appen dis ere thread got knocked dung tuh page 2, suh mi post someting suh ie go back tuh de 1st page.

Jawi mi hope yuh feeling ok and dat everyting cris wit yuh.

[phatmadame81 0]

Hello Ladies,

What happened here Sonsyne you are right what is going page 2.........

Jawi hon I hope you are fine .

Gill, Kimmy, Jonesie, Jengles.... how are you ladies doing. Who did I forget....Srry If I forgot your names,,,,,

much love to all you ladies.

Marsha

[Forever Young 1]

Hello Ladies,

What happened here Sonsyne you are right what is going page 2.........

Jawi hon I hope you are fine .

Gill, Kimmy, Jonesie, Jengles.... how are you ladies doing. Who did I forget....Srry If I forgot your names,,,,,

much love to all you ladies.

Marsha

Hey Ma,

I'm good Chica...I hope you are battling through and doing well too!

********************************************************************************

OK Jawi...on to you now!!!

Bwoy mi just finish read the entire story! Jawi...yuh haffi give hup dat deh foofoo job deh. DIS IS YOUR CALLING!!!! Jawi, I hope you are hearing mi Sis. After readin the last 15 pages...Jawi...YOU GOT IT!!!! I can't believe this is your first novel? Nooooo, suh if it's deh last ting mi ah guh duh is find yuh a publisher...DO YOU SI THAT PEOPLE FROM ALL OVA DEH VJ WORLD ARE NOT ONLY READING...BUT LOVING THIS STORY!!!

Nuh Man, dis book SELLHOFF!!!!!!! It's like yuh a git better pon every page!

Jawi, I am crying as I write this...I am so very proud of you!! You mek mi so proud to call you a friend! I AM BEGGING YOU BABY GURL...DO NOT TURN YOUR BACK ON YOIUR G-D GIVEN TALENT!!! I truly believ that G-d give everyone a gift at birth...EVERYONE HAS A SPECIAL GIFT!!! Jawi, DO NOT LOOK ANY FURTHER CAUSE THIS IS YOURS!!!!

I have been reading romance novels for 25 years (Yes, I started young wid Judy Blume)!!! I have read ALL different romances by all different people! Jawi...

THEY.....AIN'T....GOT....SHYT ...ON...YOU!!!!

TAKE A LEAP OF FAITH...TRUST ME ON THIS...AND DO YOUR DYAM TING!!!!

I LOVE YOU AND HOPE YOU ARE WELL!!!

MANY BLESSINGS & LOVE ,

Gill

Edited February 8, 2008 by Deyoungting

[Dimples876 0]

Hello Ladies,

What happened here Sonsyne you are right what is going page 2.........

Jawi hon I hope you are fine .

Gill, Kimmy, Jonesie, Jengles.... how are you ladies doing. Who did I forget....Srry If I forgot your names,,,,,

much love to all you ladies.

Marsha

Hey Ma,

I'm good Chica...I hope you are battling through and doing well too!

********************************************************************************

OK Jawi...on to you now!!!

Bwoy mi just finish read the entire story! Jawi...yuh haffi give hup dat deh foofoo job deh. DIS IS YOUR CALLING!!!! Jawi, I hope you are hearing mi Sis. After readin the last 15 pages...Jawi...YOU GOT IT!!!! I can't believe this is your first novel? Nooooo, suh if it's deh last ting mi ah guh duh is find yuh a publisher...DO YOU SI THAT PEOPLE FROM ALL OVA DEH VJ WORLD ARE NOT ONLY READING...BUT LOVING THIS STORY!!!

Nuh Man, dis book SELLHOFF!!!!!!! It's like yuh a git better pon every page!

Jawi, I am crying as I write this...I am so very proud of you!! You mek mi so proud to call you a friend! I AM BEGGING YOU BABY GURL...DO NOT TURN YOUR BACK ON YOIUR G-D GIVEN TALENT!!! I truly believ that G-d give everyone a gift at birth...EVERYONE HAS A SPECIAL GIFT!!! Jawi, DO NOT LOOK ANY FURTHER CAUSE THIS IS YOURS!!!!

I have been reading romance novels for 25 years (Yes, I started young wid Judy Blume)!!! I have read ALL different romances by all different people! Jawi...

THEY.....AIN'T....GOT....SHYT ...ON...YOU!!!!

TAKE A LEAP OF FAITH...TRUST ME ON THIS...AND DO YOUR DYAM TING!!!!

I LOVE YOU AND HOPE YOU ARE WELL!!!

MANY BLESSINGS & LOVE ,

Gill

GILL: I feel you.....Jawi has so much talent that she has gotten so many of us hooked on her first novel. I hope that she see's how much love we have for her. I can't wait to read more of her story I've told so many people about her talent and this wonderful website.

[Marlita 0]

Lawd, Gill yuh always crossing out the 'O' in God! Yuh keep ie hup, God won't know yuh talking to im! You can type im name if yuh really truly talking nice tings....He appriciate de recognition yuh knoa.

[Forever Young 1]

Lawd, Gill yuh always crossing out the 'O' in God! Yuh keep ie hup, God won't know yuh talking to im! You can type im name if yuh really truly talking nice tings....He appriciate de recognition yuh knoa.

Lawd Lita, dat sittin' really boddah yuh eh!? Arright when mi talkin' nice tings I will put deh 'o' back in...yuh appy now?

Love ya Chica,

Gill

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Lawd, Gill yuh always crossing out the 'O' in God! Yuh keep ie hup, God won't know yuh talking to im! You can type im name if yuh really truly talking nice tings....He appriciate de recognition yuh knoa.

rotf !!

[jawi876 2]

Hi everyone! I don't have time to catch up on the posts...about to leave work. I lost my internet connection at home, and can't get one back b/c my CD driver is not responding. I will probably be without a computer for a week or so...Best Buy wants to hold my laptop hostage for 7 business days!

Love you all!

Will come back as soon as I can!

[Marlita 0]

Lawd, Gill yuh always crossing out the 'O' in God! Yuh keep ie hup, God won't know yuh talking to im! You can type im name if yuh really truly talking nice tings....He appriciate de recognition yuh knoa.

Lawd Lita, dat sittin' really boddah yuh eh!? Arright when mi talkin' nice tings I will put deh 'o' back in...yuh appy now?

Love ya Chica,

Gill

Tonks, Gill-Gill!! Me knoa deh Lawd, im happericiate yuh ackknowledge him is deh wan who mek tings possible. Love yuh same weh!

[typee0 0]

Hey Y'all, How is everyone. I can not speak the lingo well but I enjoy being here with you all and thanks for the acknowledgement. I hope everyone is well. I got over a very nasty cold this past week. How are all the soon to be coming babies doing and of course everyone else. Jawi, I hope you get your computer up again. I look forward to seeing you on someones best selling list. Have a good evening all.

Health and Wellness Always

typee0

[Forever Young 1]

Hey Y'all, How is everyone. I can not speak the lingo well but I enjoy being here with you all and thanks for the acknowledgement. I hope everyone is well. I got over a very nasty cold this past week. How are all the soon to be coming babies doing and of course everyone else. Jawi, I hope you get your computer up again. I look forward to seeing you on someones best selling list. Have a good evening all.

Health and Wellness Always

typee0

Howdy Ty!!!!

SO glad to have you with us. Hope you are feeling better soon! Please feel free to drop in and hail us up anytime!!

Blessed,

Gill

[jawi876 2]

Morning all...Dimps wah gwaan mi si u

Bwoy I feel so bad fo the girls and their husbands Gosh, why Frowzy affi dead...dyam madd Delmar

Jawi I agree with everyone, your writing is so fantastic you would think that you have done this before. I have my boss telling to tell u to go get it published she LOVES your story I have to print for her every morning I come in ..baby ur fantastic u keep up the good work..mi love u long time

Thanks babes. I'm considering it seriously. I want to have another book in the works too...but I have to clean this one up to submit it. You know...take out all the bb codes...and substitute bb friendly curse words. The good news that I found out recently...my story is automatically copyrighted based on copyright laws. So, all I have to do is get a real manuscript printed, send it off to publishers...or I can try to self-publish.

I need a good pen name....kikikiki

[jawi876 2]

Lawd!! Too much happening ere! i kinda started feeling bad for Delmar when im bredda kick im inna deh face. Ohhhh, mi nah like deh violence, so me get scared feh Delmar. Den Fitz haffi comfort im ded bredda.....Lawd mi cyaan tek ie! Den, ian ah show hup agen!! All mi haffi seh is, mi fadda would not let mi guh tuh Ian alone!

All this foolishness cause crazy rass Mya wan feh rooks deh twins dem! An har still nah kno who har baby daddy do she?

I feel you on the violence...but I'm trying to touch on a little of everything. Hush puttus...ie soon gwaan. Remember Melodee just got pregnant by Ian. She and Delmar thought that she was the reason they couldn't have a child together. Melodee got rid of Tradee's baby, not Delmar's when they were in school.

*Hint* Delmar is shooting blanks

You are absolutely brilliant, execellent, I have read anything this good in years WAY to MTFUKING GO!!!!! I am soo proud of you...(spoken as if I'm somebody who makes a difference well I do, but u know what I mean)

You mean a lot! I love the votes of confidence. I hope its not a case of family telling me that I'm good like those poor souls on American Idol. :lol:

[jawi876 2]

AWAT DEH BUMBACLAAT A GWAAN OVA YEHSUH...EH????

IS WAT A WEH ONNUH IS WICKID SUH!!!!!! NO ONE NUH TINK FI SEH...LET MI HAIL HUP GILL...FIND HOUT IF SHE GIT DEH WEDDING INVITE???????

OK...MI JUSSA GIT TUH DEH START-OVER WEDDING...WAIT TILL MI CATCH-HUP MI A GUH LACE HALLA ONNUH!!

JAWI MI DARLING...BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO... ...THROUGH YUH PAIN HAN ODDAH ISSUES YUH STILL A BLAST THROUGH HAN SISTREN MI IS PROUDDAH YUH!!!

LOVE YUH FUH DAT!!!!!

BLESS-ED LOVE TO HALLA ONNUH...yuh likkle wretch yuh!!!

GILL

De way yuh search suss...mi neva tink sey yuh need hinvite nor directions...cha!