My name ain't Stella....

[Yaads 0]

This is so good Jawi! Much respect for your writing skills

Come on Toya...go for Fitz!!!

Mya must be preggers now with all that sex on the beach

True DAT, Yardie!! Yeah Man, mi much prefer Toya wid Fitzroy! Rasta to freaky freaky fi mi...him & him hole spilt personality self! First, him a starring at Tran amd Melodee, now Tran and Mya...maybe it's Tran 'im in love wid

LOVE IT STILL JAWS!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MY BEAUTIFUL WONDERFUL SISTREN!!!!

Bless,

Gill

Oh how quickly this could become a batty man story

I have it on good authority that the story will never take that turn. The author has had quite enough of gay Jamaican videos and the like to last her a lifetime. Thanks!

Good to know I don't know if we all could take it

[Jonesie 1]

This is so good Jawi! Much respect for your writing skills

Come on Toya...go for Fitz!!!

Mya must be preggers now with all that sex on the beach

True DAT, Yardie!! Yeah Man, mi much prefer Toya wid Fitzroy! Rasta to freaky freaky fi mi...him & him hole spilt personality self! First, him a starring at Tran amd Melodee, now Tran and Mya...maybe it's Tran 'im in love wid

LOVE IT STILL JAWS!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MY BEAUTIFUL WONDERFUL SISTREN!!!!

Bless,

Gill

Oh how quickly this could become a batty man story

BOAL! LOL LOL LOL LOL

[SupportOAFJF 0]

No batty man ting roun here

[Jonesie 1]

*Melodee had fallen asleep in only her stilettos waiting for Delmar to return and finish what they had started on the verandah. She wasn’t sure how long she had been sleeping, or how long she had cried. Melodee would never let him know that she cried whenever he disappeared. She knew that Delmar’s weakness was women, and she tried to keep things fresh and exciting between them. She could not loose him, and she would continue to turn a blind eye to his philandering ways. Delmar was an excellent lover, and left Travis in his dust. She had been in love with Travis during secondary, but his bedroom skills left a lot to be desired. Her girlfriends had told her how Delmar’s skills made them weak. So, she set her eyes on Delmar, and set a plan in motion that should have gotten rid of Travis for good.

Melodee is startled awake by an insistent pounding on the front door. The person is in a hurry to get in, and she is certain that it is not Delmar. She rubs her tear-swollen eyes, and pads over to the door while shrugging into her kimono robe. Her heart lurches in her throat at the sight of him. Their resemblance is uncanny. There was a time when she couldn’t tell them apart, a time when she really loved Travis. A thought makes her tremble in stark fear, and snatches the door open.*

Melodee: Rasta! Whaa happen tuh Shotta? Oh Gawd! Whaa mek?

LAWD WAT A SINTING!

[Forever Young 1]

*Melodee had fallen asleep in only her stilettos waiting for Delmar to return and finish what they had started on the verandah. She wasn’t sure how long she had been sleeping, or how long she had cried. Melodee would never let him know that she cried whenever he disappeared. She knew that Delmar’s weakness was women, and she tried to keep things fresh and exciting between them. She could not loose him, and she would continue to turn a blind eye to his philandering ways. Delmar was an excellent lover, and left Travis in his dust. She had been in love with Travis during secondary, but his bedroom skills left a lot to be desired. Her girlfriends had told her how Delmar’s skills made them weak. So, she set her eyes on Delmar, and set a plan in motion that should have gotten rid of Travis for good.

Melodee is startled awake by an insistent pounding on the front door. The person is in a hurry to get in, and she is certain that it is not Delmar. She rubs her tear-swollen eyes, and pads over to the door while shrugging into her kimono robe. Her heart lurches in her throat at the sight of him. Their resemblance is uncanny. There was a time when she couldn’t tell them apart, a time when she really loved Travis. A thought makes her tremble in stark fear, and snatches the door open.*

Melodee: Rasta! Whaa happen tuh Shotta? Oh Gawd! Whaa mek?

LAWD WAT A SINTING!

I KNOW!!!!! She jus' lef us hanging suh???? 'Whaa mek??', INDEED???

Gill

Mi sarry, mi couldn't hangle deh incest ting...much less batty bwoy...that wouldda be a DARK DARK turn!!

[Yaads 0]

These cliffhangers are killer

Whaa mek Melodee???

[jawi876 2]

Tradee: Greetings in de name of His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, King of King, Lord of Lords, Conquering Lion of the tribe of Judah, Elect of Jah, Mighty Negus, Ruler of Creation JAH RASTAFARI…Selassie I! Empress mi nuh mean fe startle yuh. Mi beg yuh wan second please. Nuh fret Empress. Shotta have business a road hearly dis mawnin. Im ask mi fe check yuh zeen.

Melodee: *kiss teet* Yuh still cova fe im doan? Ah whaa? Whaa im have ova yuh Rasta? Mi love yuh Shotta, but mi nuh rhaatid eeidat. Mi knoa de ongly business im a do a road involve nasty pum skettel. Chat bout!

Tradee: Empress…

Melodee: Eeehhhnnn?

Tradee: Empress mi nuh come ongly fe chat bout Shotta zeen. Mi and yuh have unfinished business. Mi nuh wan fe chat we ting pon de verandah.

Melodee: Tings nuh change fe us Rasta. Mi cyan bodda wid man mi nuh respect. Mi knoa yuh ovastand respect and tings RASTAH!!! Move wey frum mi yaad an tell yuh bredin fe do im own dirt! Cha! *She moves toward her door in dismissal.*

[Yaads 0]

Run Melodee Run!!! Lock your doors and shut the grill! Mi nuh tink dis a end well

Edited October 25, 2007 by Yardiewife

[Forever Young 1]

Run Melodee Run!!! Lock your doors and shut the grill! Mi nuh tink dis a end well

FI REAL!!!! Gwann guh git yuh pissa iron fi his RAS!!!

,

Gill

[SupportOAFJF 0]

Run Melodee Run!!! Lock your doors and shut the grill! Mi nuh tink dis a end well

FI REAL!!!! Gwann guh git yuh pissa iron fi his RAS!!!

,

Gill

ahHAA...him hot yah now..hehee

[phatmadame81 0]

I am shaking with anxiousness (is there such a bloody word )

what is gonna happen,...............lawd god

[Jonesie 1]

Tradee: Greetings in de name of His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, King of King, Lord of Lords, Conquering Lion of the tribe of Judah, Elect of Jah, Mighty Negus, Ruler of Creation JAH RASTAFARI…Selassie I!

if that ain't the longest rasta greeting ever...lawd

[nyseness 0]

Tradee: Greetings in de name of His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, King of King, Lord of Lords, Conquering Lion of the tribe of Judah, Elect of Jah, Mighty Negus, Ruler of Creation JAH RASTAFARI…Selassie I!

if that ain't the longest rasta greeting ever...lawd

For real...

[Forever Young 1]

Tradee: Greetings in de name of His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, King of King, Lord of Lords, Conquering Lion of the tribe of Judah, Elect of Jah, Mighty Negus, Ruler of Creation JAH RASTAFARI…Selassie I!

if that ain't the longest rasta greeting ever...lawd

Fi real...I was sayin deh same ting...jus wuh yuh waan from mi?? Come bang pon my door bright and hearly inna deh mawning fi tell mi DAT!!!

Gill

I am shaking with anxiousness (is there such a bloody word )

what is gonna happen,...............lawd god

I KNOW...I think EVIL TRADEE is Baaaaaack!! Dyam Psycho!!

Gill

Edited October 25, 2007 by Deyoungting

[Yaads 0]

I can't wait to hear the rest! Jawi girl...quit your job and keep writing! We need more!